BeatenBut_NotBroken / Comments

hmmm. so you're starting in the car on the way to california, right?

hey, have you written any yet? just curious.
i'm kinda anxious to see where this story will go. : /
slap me if i end up annoying you about this.

yay! i'm really excited about this story.
it's the first time i've ever written a story with someone.

uhmmmm...either Jersey or New York City. you can pick. :]

and i think it's Georgia, but i'm not sure.

hmmmm. i think either it should skip to when they're in california, scoping out the guys, or when they're on the road on the way to california.

okay, the intro's posted!

'kay. so the titles gonna be 'in it for the bounty' aaand, i'll post it on here and let you read it. if you want me to change anything about it just let me know.

i just finished writing the intro but i still don't know what we should name it. i really like the name 'potential' now, or...'in it for the bounty'. do you want to read it to see if you like it?

Yay you commented.
You ruleeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ;D
Thank you for the story comment xD xx<3

yeah, and they went to this one place that was rigged to scare people and were piiiiissed.

anyways, i'm gonna go to bed for know. i'll start writing the intro and then i'll let you know if i get any ideas for the title.

i don't have nightmares or anything, i just have really strange dreams. but then again...i had strange dreams before i started watching the show. and yeah, i'm under the belief that most haunted is rigged. but i don't think paranormal state it. and i KNOW ghost hunters isn't.

its scary shows like this one, ghost hunters, and most haunted that give me the wierdest dreams known to humanity.

haha. i like the nickname bunny.

ah. i'm watching this show called paranormal state. it's scaring me slightly. i really shouldn't be watching it at night.

people just call me bree.
i don't really have a non-name-related nickname.
though...these kids i used to babysit call me bob.

hmmm. i like munchkin. haha. skittles remind me of disobedient children because everytime they eat skitttles, they don't listen for some odd reason. must be all that damn sugar.

yeah, but i write the story for the readers, particularly the ones in the story.

oh, by the way, my character in the story is going to have the codename 'sugar', what name do you want your character to have?

yeah, part of me wants to end neighbors not so nice, so i can resolve it in a sequel. but then again, it's mainly a comedy, so i don't know if people would like that too much.

i read that one.
i like it too. i can't wait to see where the story goes.

hmmm. how about 'Potential' or...hmmm 'Kids with Guns'?
i have no clue. maybe i'll think about it tomorrow a bit more as i write the intro. maybe that will inspire me.

hmmm. i dunno. i can write the intro, cause i have an idea about how to start it. but i'll need to know what to call it before i can post it. hmmmm.