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That's true, haha. I honestly can't wait for the day that I look back at the stories that I'm proud of now and think, "Wow, I was really awful." I feel like when that happens, I'll be awesome ahaha.

Aww! It's gonna be great, I'm sure. (:

Oh my goodness, THANK YOU. You have helped me out a great deal with your comment, and certainly alleviated some of the anxiety I have been feeling towards handing that story in :P (and I am VERY glad to hear you like it without capitalization <3)

And Lean On Me could work! It's sung by a soulful black man!

I was actually pretty proud with how that turned out. I probably shouldn't say that though, because I'm sure in a couple years I'll be humiliated by how terrible it seems by then.

You might also be interested to know that most of it was written on the train as you slept a foot above me. You should be honored to have taken part in such an earth-shattering event.

Yeah, I didn't read much on here before I started this, either. Mostly because, I think, I was discouraged by the amount of cliche plot lines, or poorly made layouts that are too difficult to read. But whenever I find a good one, I make sure that I leave a comment so they know that someone did read it. Even if a million others had, too.

Haha, I've been writing since I was twelve, as well! I'd like to think that, even if it was only a few years ago, I've definitely gotten much, much better. I think that's the case for everyone, though, haha. But yes, definitely hard to forget.

It's really different from a lot of things I've seen on this site, too! But I think that should attract more readers, I mean, it's not the same story you just read by a different author on here. I don't know, I just really like your style of writing, too.

Don't be nervous! I bet it'll be great. (:

You're very welcome! I'm actually doing a review thing where I try to read fifty completed stories throughout the year and write a review on them, and I just got sucked into yours right away. It was so different from what I usually read, because I usually read The Maine fanfiction or original (by the way, I'll definitely check out your new story!), but I don't know, I just really loved that it was dark.

And the ending was unexpected, too. It made a big impact on me. (:

Oh, haha, well, I'm glad you stayed! And I know what you mean. Writing is sort of hard to forget after you've started, I think.

AAAAHHHH!!!!! You're back! Does this new summary mean you'll be on mibba this year? If so, I guess I will too

Rude! Now everyone who goes to creep me is going to think I'm mentally handicapped!
How dare you. I am offended.

I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS DAMNED MIBBA!

thank you ^.^ you're very lovely yourself!

Oh no problem! This is my absolute favourite story and I would hate myself if I never found out how it ended! I used your writing as an example of the writing I love most for a paper I wrote in Creative Writing. Your writing is some of the best I've read ever and you should be super proud of it and definitely take it to the next level. I'm going to miss this story SO MUCHHHH. It's like a friend moving away :(

no problem :D

You're totally welcome. Your story is genuinely one of the best on this site, you're a seriously talented writer!

awws, it's no problem xD i've loved your writing since vegas boys (on quizilla O.o)! waiting for you isn't a pain because whenever you return you always bring something famazing to the table! it'd be a pain if you disappeared and then gave us bad updates, but i don't think you're capable of a [b]bad[/b] update!

i can't wait to see how it's gonna end ^.^

SOOO happy you're back hun! Loved the update but sad that the next will be the end.. :'( Oh well, all good things must come to an end, but the end is the part where we start again.

Haha it's no problem. I always hold out for stories I really like in hopes that one day the author will update :]

Oh my God you updated Afraid of the Dark. I really, really, really missed that story and this chapter was perfect in all ways and the letter part was great and I love how he was all "Fall Out Boy" and not "I" or whatever because it just made it more... I don't know. This chapter made me really emotional in all the best ways. I'm going to miss this story so much. Definitely without a doubt my favourite Pete Wentz story OF ALL TIME. And I am absolutely NOT exaggerating. Just the concept and the whole pacing of it and the detail and description. I am in love with your writing. I'm going to miss this story but it's one I'm always going to remember :)

And now that I've left you like...50 billion comments I feel like a creeper.
I'm just so excited you're back :3

oh my god thank you for your comment on weekend. I don't even know what I'm doing, I've been stuck with writing for a while now and this is the first semi decent idea I've had in months so I'm trying.
And the fact that it's a Pete story makes me that much more uncomfortable with it...no one does Pete like you do my dear :)

I missed you omg I hope everything is good since you last visited us in Mibba-world!