thanks for the story comment, but know you have to think.
why did she so easily tell him and how did he know what to look for? And whats the significance the of different name?
there are subtle but very small hints, in the whole story so far of what has happened to her. you have to look for them.
well i can defiantly tell you that the summary is a very good hook.
It's vague, but also reveals a lot and it will let the readers mind explore before they even start reading.
I'll read it when you start posting chapter. :)