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Just in case you recover this, I joined fictionpress for you!

I would love to read anything that you publish, you definitely have talent. "Behind these Refuge Walls" is original. It isn't just some ordinary story and I love that! Also, like I said you have a great talent and I can't wait to read more of your work. If you wouldn't mind, if you ever do publish any of your work, please let me know!

Hi! I'm new to mibba, and I was hoping you could check out the story I'm writing. It's called "it started with a bet." it's about a girl who finds out that the most popular guy at school has taken on a bet to get her to go out with him. So she decides to make a little side bet of her own and play along. Of course, it doesn't end up an easy game like she planned.

Anyway, hope you can give it a look over. Thanks!

Aha true :]

You should join Booksie; you get amazing feedback, a lot of love, there are billions of stories and the people there are awesome (:
You don't get the comment rape when you join [Well I did...most people don't] but if you get the right connections tons of people comment you and your work :D

I'm from leciester ^^

Aha, I don't think I'm good at anything, it's not modesty I just honestly think I'm not good, apparently it's some kind of mental disorder? :L
If I'm ever famous for writing [I doubt I will be :L] I'll defiantly put something in about you :D

Oh, on Booksie :3 I love it there :D You get a lot more feedback on your writing then on here ^^

Ooft Thanks (;
I personally, don't really like this one o:
I've never really been able to interpratate(sp) most poetry, and this was for a special girl, I like my others more, they have a lot more meaning and passion to me :3

Oh no, It's fine, I like being Over-rated xD

I wouldn't envy, it's not really a skill, just how my mind expresses its self, always finding thymes :3
One of my poems:

Your heart is harder than a diamond,
Cold to the touch,
Keeping away all the pain, that could be caused by lust.


Locked away inside,
Like a chest,
A box full of diamonds,
Waiting for its quest.


Thieves and robbers try to steal it away,
But they are frozen by your steely gaze,
Why am i the lucky begger?
Who is the only one in which you bestow this pleasure.

That's my most popular poem, I got about...*goes to check* 160 comments on it :3 Aha (': and I've even layed it out wrong, I missed a line on a stanza...but somehow people like it o:

I'm over-rated (':

Oh, thank you.
I'm not too into writing stories, I was a poet and then I wrote a short-story about a break-up I had with a girl, a lot of people encouraged me to write more after that and that's when I started 'Her Favourite Angel' I don't think I'm very good, because I am a poet afterall, and i'm not even good with that >.<

Aha good!
It's true though o:
If I talk to someone for a long time and grow an attatchment, someone else talks to them and I just want to yell 'MINE'
I'm strange (':

Sounds cool

Vampire knight is cool! Whats blood+?

Anime is awesome ^.^ what anime have you seen?

yeah it's Jap learn it in school
i failz :L

O genki desu
I'm good
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More or less anyway, O genki desuka
are you good?

Yeah it seems to be like that, it sucks

Yeah!! i get souvenirs then birthday presents!
And seeing how i've got nothing else to do while there in japan i can babysit a friend and get paid!

Yeah, a school trip the lucky buggers. But i get presents later so its all good^^

I really want to! but it costs money. This holiday all my friends are going to japan =(

Whoa! That awesome!!!
I've never been over seas
it doesnt matter as long as you enjoyed yourself

Heh, where'd you go?