Thank you so much for the comment on my poem. It means a ton, poems are so hard to get comments for. And this one, it's like my baby. I worked on it for nearly a month.
I've always had a thing for metaphors and '…'. I just like the sense of trailing off and uncertainty, I guess, and it worked well for this poem.
Thanks againn :)
Thanks for commenting on the journal. And of course I love any type of criticism, but I just don't know what you mean by choppy? Could you explain so that I can work on it.
Hey! sorry I haven't been on in ages. the teacher assigned poems, I got an emily dickinson one. oh well. anyways, I have a question--am i allowed to post the start of one of my stories? and add to it more and more?
oh thanks! Emma's doll was inspired by a picture of a doll, actually, haha. And I'll totally let you read the essay if he allows me to =] your poem is amazing. I'm Lily.
x3
Deidara is FEmale
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