Ay ay agreed but at the end of the day it's near impossible to change the way you think and your whole belief system momenterally. It takes time to adjust. Maybe I'll be more positive in the future...
Thanks for the con-crit on the poem. Yes, I was trying to make it rhyme. I'm not much of a poet nor lyricist. My cousin wanted me to try to write a song, though, and that was the result. You're right, though, the part about burning it down does seem forced and out of place.
why tank you
but no i decided not to go...i just kicked it here at home listening to this new cd my sister left for me its was fun i did some writing and reading so it was cool =)
xxx
I'm sorry -- thing is, I write these stories on here for other people so I've not really done as much as try; the things I post on here I don't consider good work. Hence, my stories aren't that good compared to those of which I send off to be published in magazines, etc.
Uhh the thing about me being insecure & having trust issues is not an opinion it's a fact. And of course you wouldn't understand because you don't know me and probably never will. And maybe I think that sometimes not knowing is better than the truth...