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  • Cinematic Sunset

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    no, that doesn't sound strange at all! i was so hoping people would like it, because it felt better to me than val questioning it the whole time.

    and thank you very much! you always leave comments that touch upon the things i thought i didn't get exactly right, and it's awesome that there's someone out there to tell me that i did! so thank you. (:
    July 2nd, 2012 at 04:15am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    i love youuuuu and your loyal commenting! I thought throwing in a bit of Alex's perspective was necessary, right? The story is going to be mostly third person but there will be more Alex since his pov is interesting and fun to write and maybe a bit of layla's down the road too! (:
    June 30th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • Cinematic Sunset

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    i feel that the ignoring the person that you've kissed or have admitted your feelings to is just overdone. having done it in the past, i just wanted to take a new approach.

    haha, thanks! being timid and waiting for alex to do it just isn't what val is to me. so i'm glad you liked it!
    June 25th, 2012 at 12:41am
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    thank you so much! i always feel like my banter is lacking something. i'm glad that one was successful. and i DO enjoy making him adorable, hahaha. thank you again, though!
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:35am
  • BlackCoffee

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    Thank you for your comment on my standalone "Mute" :) I really appreciate it!
    June 9th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • harlequin. girl.

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    thanks, again, for the story comment! (:
    i'm really glad to be working on this story again its so fun!
    June 8th, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • getd0wn

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    Hi, and thank you for your comment. I had no idea I had posted the first half of my story on chapter 3, instead of the actual chapter 3. The REAL chapter 3 is now there if you'd like to read it to make sense now. Thank you for your impute, happy reading :)
    June 7th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    woo!I figured out how to fix the link haha I'm such a dummy and I put in quotes like I normally would for html haha whoops
    June 7th, 2012 at 12:01am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    I'm doing pretty well. How are you?
    And yeah I know what you mean. Overall, I guess the new mibba actually is improved it's just very confusing haha
    June 6th, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • harlequin. girl.

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    well thank you(: unfortunately, though that"s exactly how I tried to post the link and it didn't work. not sure what's going on with "new mibba" but i'm not a huge fan yet aha
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • harlequin. girl.

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    That's so sweet! Thank youuu :D haha
    I hope to have the second and third chapters up within the week. The 2nd one will probably be finished & posted by tomorrow. I went to edit it tonight and I just couldn't look at it again after staying up with it all night last night haha
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    hahaha you're like my sole reader at this point. i'm wicked excited. i stayed up till 5 in the morning working on chapter 2. it'll be up soon. i can't wait to finish this aha and i love how devoted you've been as a reader. now that i'm out of high school (i graduated on saturday. woo!) i'm going to have so much more time for writing. i'll be devoting this summer to finishing INLAM (: also, in the fall i'm majoring in creative writing at college so YAY haha thanks so much for sticking around
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • william.

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    Thank you so very much for commenting on "Captured".
    It means a lot to know you liked it so much. ^^
    I shall probably update it today, actually. c:
    June 5th, 2012 at 06:53pm
  • mmmxalright

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    I've always been a fan of your stories :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • NerdGlasses

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    I honestly don't know why. Maybe because Zooey reminds me of myself or I can relate to her, Idk. I just love the way they are with each other. How they talk and interact. It's like they have their own precious little world. God, I sound ridiculous. In short, it's an awesome story and you deserve all the feedback you get.
    June 3rd, 2012 at 08:39pm
  • jade_

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    Hey Grace, thanks for your comment on Reserved earlier this week.
    Hopefully Jack and Alex can keep themselves off the Ivy hate train haha
    hope you're well!
    xo
    June 3rd, 2012 at 09:56am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    The speedy feedback happened by accident, I happened to be checking my email when it said you had updated, haha. But you're welcome!
    June 2nd, 2012 at 06:53am
  • Cinematic Sunset

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    haha, thank you!

    that "what if" factor is always a tough thing to cope with, but throwing in val's distractions for the moment will keep her mind off of it for a while.
    May 28th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • Cinematic Sunset

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    i'm so glad you think it's refreshing! i wanted to do something different, even going as far to throw another guy in there for val to like because i haven't exactly seen something like that before. and i'm really stoked that it seems that i'm pulling it off.

    and thank you so much for the compliment! oddly, i've been feeling like i lost my style lately, and i've been struggling to get it back. so a boost definitely helps. (:

    as always, i'm so glad you're enjoying the story! <3
    May 21st, 2012 at 02:18am
  • Cinematic Sunset

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    haha, that's true! and it's often a very thin line, which makes it way too easy to cross.

    i'm really excited to play this all out, so i'm stoked that you're excited for it as well! (:
    May 14th, 2012 at 03:20am