hey! i know its vain of me to think you care but i wanted to say sorry for the sort of longish wait and keep you posted by letting you know that the second chapter of the rewrite will probs be up tomorrow since you're currently my only reader & i used to have like 200 lol :)
But it was obvious that in the end Chloe and Alex would get together. I think Logan was like a bit of a bridge for Chloe, from Paul to Alex. Plus, he was just awesome
Thank you for the help and the comments :) by the way I've been reading Drive Away's stories and they're amazing! Thank you so much for the recommendations! Update MFEO? <-- earns you another thank you lol Hope you are well :D
Call me crazy but this will be my 3rd time. They're just phenomenal! :) If your ever looking for a great all time low story try reading Take A Sad Song And Make It Better - http://stories.mibba.com/read/279895/Take-A-Sad-Song-And-Make-It-Better/
OR
I'll Never Compare To You. http://stories.mibba.com/read/267330/Ill-Never-Compare-To-You/
thankkks so much haha and i know i am pretty silly about this stuff. this story is really "practice" for me so thats how i justify going over and over and over it. one last thing is you dont mind! you remember "shannnon" from the original? her relevance as a character wasnt actually all there but she was the merch girl for kris's band. i'm thinking of replacing her with the new character jenna. cuz her brothers in the band and shes layla friend. i'm wondering if that would make more sense or be too complicated for me and i cant decided. thoughts? (:
thanks a billion!
omggg thanks soso much :D
you didnt think it was stupid? it was coming out all wrong for so long but i think i finally got it. the beginning was always the toughest part b/c its such a weird arrangement to explain with how she meets kris and how that eventually leads to her meeting the guys in ATL.
if you dont mind i have a few questions:
was it clear enough what the "two things" that kris wanted from oher were?
were the differences between layla and kris's normal flings clear enough? and did it make sense why he went for her?
and finally it made sense how laylas best friend was also the younger sister of one of kris's bandmates and all?
haha thanks for entertaining my neurotic-perfectionist interrogation!
I FINISHED!!!!!!!!! OMG I FINALLY FINISHED IT LOLOL
haha okay so i'm just gonna re-read and edit it up all nice. should be posted in like 10-15 minutes woooooooooooooooooo
i'm only keeping you updated because i feel i owe you an apology. i shouldnt have said anything thats when things get screwed up. as you probably know by now, i am incredible unreliable. i uprooted [i] some things [/i] in the chapter at midnight-ish. keep in mind, i've been working on this one intro-chapter for MONTHS. i am making the promise it will be completeed and updated tomorrow. dont hate me.