hey i like your story. i read all in almost one sitting. i think i know what's wrong with elyse but i don't want to say and ruin it for other people if they didn't try and guess. it was a good cliffhanger, i like where the story is going.
my name is kelly by the way. i hope you're well.
It is telling me the comments page for your story doesn't exist. so i'm leaving my comment here. I almost cried!! It was an amazing update :) but I almost cried by the end.
Thanks! :D
I need to re-write chapter
two and post it. . I was on Quizilla
and it would not publish or save chapter
two at all! I've written chapter two I'd say around 8 times, :O