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  • Meru21

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    Thanks for the comments on "Disenchanted". Once again, I love your feedback and appreciate the corrections. I didn't even notice that I used "mothering". >///< Oops.
    August 9th, 2012 at 12:01am
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    @ Lady.Orion
    Yep, finally! T_T

    Although I swore to myself never to study again, in the end I chose to take my Masters. >_> I'm not sure to to be amazed at myself or slap myself silly. -_- Haha...

    What are you doing now?
    August 8th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Oh, I'm horrible for not replying. I'm doing great and I hope you're still kicking haha. Mr. Green

    So you got your degree??!
    August 6th, 2012 at 05:21pm
  • Meru21

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    Thanks for the latest comment on CL.
    I get told a lot that it's like a manga--which is great because that's the feel I wanted for the story. It's supposed to be upbeat, dramatic and hilarious. I've lost some of the fun as things have started to get serious, but I'm trying to get it back. Slowly but surely. I'm glad that you can picture everything so clearly, though. That's the greatest compliment. Also, I don't mind if you tell me what's "wrong" with it or what's bothering you about the story. If I can do anything to make it better (and I know my grammar isn't perfect), then I would love help. Thanks again, and thanks for being honest and a fan.
    July 23rd, 2012 at 07:57pm
  • Meru21

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    That would be great. I love feedback. After answering your comments, I went and reread the summary I wrote for "Just Like You" and then went and reread the first chapter of the manga someone said it was like to recall the story and, yeah, they're completely different. lol. Or they're going to be. They are just similiar in the beginning. It's probably because I read so much manga that most of what I write turns out like one. =_=' That's flattering and awesome, but it gets kind of frustrating for some of my other stories. Anyway. I hope that you take interest in some of my other works. "Disenchanted" seems up your alley. =) I hope to hear more from you, and thank you for the honesty.
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:33am
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    My stories "Just Like You" and "Chocolate Love" are completely original, trust me on that. I DO NOT tolerate plagerizing. I can't stand it. I tried to keep it so that CL has manga-like drama and fun, but it is completely original. "Just Like You" I've heard is like a manga called "Birdcage" or something of the like. I went and checked that out and was surprised to find that it was rather like that, but that manga takes a completely different direction than what I want to do with that. Of course, I was thhinking of dropping "Just Like you" because I just don't want to write it, but I might just rework the whole story because it doesn't click right. There's something missing in the first chapter or so, you know? But it's definitely not stolen. And I don't do fanfics. I can't stand them. =/
    July 18th, 2012 at 05:46pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    Hey you! Still alive and kicking? :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 03:29pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    No. D: My dad is supposed to check HIS email and let me know. I have no idea if he has so I dunno if I'm accepted or not. :(

    September 23rd. (:

    Thank you! It's already day 16. Almost over.
    August 16th, 2011 at 10:49pm
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    I haven't been writing at all. D:

    My life has been up and down lately. Like, my father left the country and he won't be back for at least 6months. That's like...a half year man! And I don't know where I'm going to go for my first year of university. Today (gulps) is the day I'm supposed to find out whether or not I got that scholarship for abroad. If I didn't, I'm stuck here. At least both universities are free. That's the only good thing I see about my situation.

    Other than that...Nothing much is up. It's Ramadan time. Half-way through it. Then I turn 17. Oh boy! But it's been quiet this week.
    August 15th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • Mama Kas

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    Thanks for the story comment. :D
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:21pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    Hey! :) How's it been?
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:28pm
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    Thanks for reading Resigned :) I'm glad that I seem to have fixed most of my tense problems...XD At least for now.

    Now, before I forget, I'm going to go find that spot in chapter one where I mispelled town on accident like you said XD

    Thank you so very much! :)
    April 13th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Welcome. :)

    Oh and, I can't find the file I wrote it in. o_o
    But I have it written in my notes in case, so if I don't find the file, I can always type it up.

    I won't tell you when you get a sneak peek but I promise you will. ;)
    Don't get excited now - I never mentioned how big of a sneak peek it will be.
    April 12th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    Oh and, oh my God, happy belated birthday!
    I was actually going to update the day after but--you know what happened.
    FIFTH BIRTHDAY I MISSED THIS YEAR. DAMN.
    April 9th, 2011 at 08:03am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Sorry to bother you, but in your comment on my story "Resigned" you agreed with YuffieProductions's earlier statement that I kept changing tense. I went back and tried to correct it in chapter two, so if it's not too much trouble, would you re-read that chapter and tell me if I still need to work on it?

    Whether you do or whether you don't is fine. It's all up to you, but thanks either way for reading it at all. XD
    March 31st, 2011 at 12:38pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    I'm sorry haah!

    I did. Hmm. Well, I didn't think it was very professional, having all those stories up and randomly updating. I needed to focus on just one. And at the moment, I'm most inspired for By Kismet (and I guess Hush). But by all means, I'm going to continue BTR! Don't even think I won't. ;) I seriously love that story, there's so much about it. It was through it that I met Cate (tunnels) and for that I'm grateful.

    I actually (not to tease but!) have the next two chapters. They just needed editing and elongating but they were ready. And about a week or two ago, I was very inspired but I got swamped with too much tests/exams/stress that I had no time. And when I do, I'm way too tired and mentally exhausted.

    I won't make promises, but I will try and bringing it back by June/July/August (unless I'm too busy; afterall, it's the summer after senior year!) and if not then, when I'm steady in uni. XD I feel like university will give me the time I need, even though a lot of people say otherwise.

    I'm disappointed too. I almost put it back up. But I hated the prologue and ugh. I just wanted to experiment with a few changes and didn't want to confuse anyone reading. :3

    Writer's block is forever my enemy.

    I can't wait until you post it. It must be really precious to be kept for so long.

    I don't think I'm depressed. But I do feel like I'm teetering on a very unsteady balance. I'm always watching my moves these days, as well as other people's. It's like one slip up and I'm going to come crashing down.

    But I've got amazing friends both online and offline and awesome stories to read that keep me balanced, at least for awhile. :)

    I hope things are good for you. Want a sneak peek of the next chapter? XD I feel like I owe you that much at least. :3
    March 30th, 2011 at 11:53pm
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    Thank you for reading and commenting on Resigned.

    I know the changing tenses is a bad thing...sometimes it just happens when I write. I try not to do it, but sometimes I just go with the flow of my writing and let my fingers get ahead of my brain :) For the most part, though, I think the chapter was in past tense...right? I hope so. It was supposed to be, 'cause it's kind of like a flashback....haha.

    Again, thanks for reading! And I appreciate the feedback!
    March 29th, 2011 at 12:28pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    I'm sorry. I didn't want to, but I did. It had to. I believe every writer has to go through that time sometime. I wanted to be different, but I guess I'm not. (Either you'll know what I'm talking about or you'll go and find out when you read this...)

    And I know I broke a lot of promises and for that I'm sorry. Breaking promises is something I don't (normally) do and I hate it when I do it. :(

    Aside from that up there ^, how are you?
    March 28th, 2011 at 07:34pm
  • Howl

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    Hey, I know this may seem pretty out of the blue after such a long time but you used to comment on my story Hunted by Shadows and I just want to tell you that it is finally finished if you're interested :3
    Toodles. ^___^
    March 23rd, 2011 at 10:38am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Pwetty layout. :3

    A flutter nutter is a kind of butterfly...I'd draw it for you, but I suck at it haha.

    Anyways, I've come to beg for your forgiveness! I came on Mibba with the full intention of updating BTR but I've got annoying siblings that are making me frustrated right now. I cannot, I repeat, cannot write the chapter before the death chapter with a nagging, four year old yelling, "Give me the computer! Urgh!" every five seconds.

    I promised never to let a month pass but...I'm going to have to. :( But it's reasonable! I have finals this Monday until Feb 2 and Calculus I'm afraid, needs it's time.

    So I'm groveling at your feet haha. The minute I hit my break, I'll write the chapter and the week after that, the death chapter is out! So you'll get two chapters before Valentine's. :D

    (runs away before you can throw something.) Talk to you soon! <3
    January 22nd, 2011 at 10:28am