IndependantKarissa / Comments

@ IndependantKarissa
I can't stop reading it though, that's the problem atm lol. Like I've lost sleep for work because I can't stop reading it since it's so good!!!

@ RFarley1991
Yeah I really wouldn't read crushed by a Vampire it's not great and all the important pieces get kept in Pheonix Rising anyways. Should be an update on Pheonix Rising by this Sunday

@ IndependantKarissa
Yes that all made sense. I started reading, and patiently waiting for the next chapter of, Phoenix Rising and then Sunday I found Crushed by a Vampire and when I started reading chapter one I was like "I've read this before...." and I was actually going to try and find the series and tell the author (ie you) that someone copied your chapter, but then found out that you're one in the same lmao. Ao I wasn't sure what I should be reading, after I found that out.

I can definitely tell a difference in writing as I continue reading Crushed by a Vampire. There's almost a young feel to the beginning chapters (which makes sense if you've been writing this for 10 years lol)

@ RFarley1991
My werewolf family and werewolf family go together (but my werewolf family is the edited version so only one needs to be read). They are not connected to anything else. They may eventually be incorporated into the same setting as the other immortal stories but I'm not sure yet. There was a big pushback (-4 subscribers) with a recent update so I'm now reconsidering deleting the chapter or updating my older stories so my future readers know what to expect.

Immortal Blood and Crushed by a Vampire go together and are happening in the same timeline (it's probably better to read crushed by a Vampire first).

Pheonix Rising is the edited version of crushed by a vampire, but I've changed the character names and it is honestly so different from the source material that it isn't necessary to read crushed to understand it. Saving Connor is written in the same universe as Pheonix Rising (but not relevant at all to crushed by a vampire)

I have spent about 9 years tweaking the characters and setting so it's honestly a lot to navigate even for me. Here's a full list of stuff related to each other...

Crushed By a Vampire+Immortal Blood. If reading one of these it's better to read both. If reading both start with crushed.

Pheonix Rising (source material is crushed by a vampire...loosely)+ Saving Connor. Reading both is unnecessary. The Corrupted and Pupeteer demo chapters (that I'm unlikely to continue) are also connected to this setting.

My Werewolf Family+werewolf family (source material). I'd really only read the newest version because the other was written 8 years ago and some parts need serious work

I hope that all made sense. My original goal was to tie the immortal stories to each other, but that may be too daunting of a task. In my opinion Pheonix Rising is the best immortal story I have out there as I'm actually prepping final edits for publishing. Crushed By A Vampire was started when I was still in highschool so until chapter 10 or so the syntax and plot isn't great just an fyi. It really does improve (and the first two chapters have been updated) but chapters 3-10 Are currently not great.

Do all of your immortal stories go together?? I have now found myself starting to read two of them (plus your one about the Jewish girl) and am wondering if I need to read one of them first before the others???

hey there, i'm james. thanks for the rec on void, it made me pretty happy. ;)
i notice you only write origfic. that also makes me happy. i salute you, fellow rebel.
hit me up if you'd like to talk writing. or space, space is good.

edit: thank you for your amazing comment. literally made my entire day. :D

This site has changes so much since I left... Almost unrecognizable... A lot of people have left also. Does anyone else remember the old mibba when there were 10 new updates every thirty seconds to one minute? I used to never be able to find my story in the story section. Surely they have realized that changing the site formatting was a disaster... and whats with 9/10 of all stories being fan fictions? So much for originality nowadays.... This is not fanfic.net :(

If you really are leaving this site you should go to wattpad.com or storywrite.com.
BTW I love the story 'Werewolf Family'. Hope to see the next chapter soon :D

still waiting for a new chapter of werewolf family. love your stories so keep up the good work :D

Thanks for the poem comment!

Hey. Updated my 'Last Night.' story =))) Hope you get to read it soon! I miss your comments :3

http://stories.mibba.com/read/441991/Last-Night/10 Hey, I updated my story. =) Hope you get to read it soon. Teehee. :3

Aww <3 thank you so much! your comment made my day. =)) and yes, she deserves a happy ending. let's see about that though. :3

Aww. How's your sleep now? Are you still tired? Hope you have enough energy to keep reading this story! Thank you for the comment. =))

thanks for the comment

Thanks for the poem comment (: Appreciate it

I updated fire, just to let you know. So glad you like it! <3

Thank you for the story comment.

I'll beware the run on.

I'm an aspiring writer but I'm definitely not the best because my language arts teacher SUCKS.
Sometimes I take criticism really hard but...

lol anyways, Thanks. You should keep commenting... or message me.

~Madi.

Yes! I think you should, it's got a great plot.

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