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Dude, I've seen his mom. They look SO much alike.Same noses, totally. Although Tom has his mom's eyes. I wonder if that means Oli got his dad's eyes, then? Mmm.... If Oliver had a child with Tom's eyes. Wow. I think that's a little too much gorgeousness for one human being.

Haha, I don't think you drag your things out at all! Really, I always love longer chapters compared to shorter ones, anyways. Makes it feel like I'm actually reading something worthwhile when it's longer, y'know?
Oh boy, three plotlines running at once? I'm definitely excited to see how it'll all work out though, since it seems to be coming together nicely, so far. I feel so bad for Tom in Pretty Bird. D: Poor guy, he really doesn't deserve what he has.

Oh. I don't know... I always just assume people with such great stories have been around for a while, ahah. Especially when they get good subscribers and comments. Of course, that probably goes to show how much of a newbie I am. Ahah. Oh boy, it's amazing to see those stories with so many subscribers and comments. Makes me extremely jealous, ahah. But of course, they deserve it when it's that great of a story.

:/ sorrry for not being on. today was such a bad day.
and i have major anxiety right now, wondering where the fuck that spider is
because i'm in my room now. D:

but yay for moons&stars! we got good feedback :D

Duuuude, the internet is SO distracting. Even more so at night. Whoa, that's like, freaking epic. Now I'm seriously wondering if it would be possible for Oliver to have kids with eyes that color. Haha, oh, my mind will wander tonight!

Thank you, really. Only when I started posting the second time did I realize how much I really have dragged this story out, but it gets interesting in the future!
And I'm definitely glad you liked the plot twist. That one shocked a lot of people. I like to make things unbelievably complicated, ahha.

Yes, I definitely have a feeling it'll take a while to build up a fanbase. Really? You've only been here a month? I wouldn't have guessed that, ahha. It's hard to get some recognition, but I'm patient... sort of. Haha.
Ah, true. I might take that up then. Just give it more time to settle in. Gives me more time to write up some more, as well.

On the contrary, I've found more people get disinterested in the story when the chapters are long.

usually I do 5 pages on microsoft. I was just about to change the layout, its funny you say that.

Ahahah, no prob, man. ADD gets the best of us.
Whoa, seriously?! That's so awesome to hear. I feel like such a newbie around here, still trying to earn my readers, ahah. I'm posting up the rest tonight, so that I'm current with what I have on Quizilla. And definitely more will be coming soon! :D Jesus, I'm so stoked you liked it!

Ooh. Me too. But mine's like a permanent case of it. All my updates suck nowadays. XD

And you're welcome. It's very very good.

No problem at all. It really made me think about some stuff, so I thank you for that. (:

Please continue to write, you have an amazing talent.

Soo true. It means so much to know that people out there are liking it. I saw I already had readers, and I was like, WHAT?! Haha. But really, I'm definitely excited for the sequel, as well as reading that Curtis Ward story (probably because I'm also a Scorpio, ahah). Thank you, really, and I hope you can stick with it. Somehow I'm just not realizing how odd this story is, but it gets better, I swear!

I've gotta say, I'm so glad you're interested in my Oliver story, since just in the past few days, I've read People Got A Lotta Nerve, and LOVED it. I'm starting Pretty Bird tonight, ahah. But seriously, thanks for the comment already :] I'll be posting up all of the other chapters tonight then, probably.

bahhh, i'm brain dead, dude. D:
i updated Moons&Stars two seconds ago. :D

Awe you had to explain the dream? Haha
I think my heart just melted.

I dare not admit to it.

His 5 o'clock shadow gets you excited?
I'd be laughing if I didn't feel the same way. Wait! I mean eh. I don't. Crap.

haha I am right now. I'm in dire need of a typing break.

Aw haha
Of course I would, your writing is epic! As is hers, I really need to check her Oliver story out. D: I should seriously write it down so I don’t forget again for the hundredth time.

ahh I'm jealous that you can actually pick a team.

One second I think that I like Oli a bit better, then Tom just crawls back into my brain and I'm confused all over again.

Thank you for the comment <3

I have half of the udate written already so I think I'll have it updated again by morning D:

Not to me lmao

Well you have some Lee now, I've just updated <3

Awesome!

D: I’m sorry. I’m about to update Lee though. I’ve got a friend who keeps bringing the story up.
It’s peer pressure!! haha

I know. I shouldn't deprive myself of mibba's amazingness. =O

=( I'm sorry. I just hated where it was going. I need to re think the plot.
I'm going to start a Curtis story when I finish my Lee or Oliver one.

Which reminds me I need to go read your Curtis co write D: