Evil_Angel / Comments

Now that I can understand. Generally when people act like that, they need to be taken down a peg, not many people can tolerate people with their heads up their butts xD

That's pretty much right. Generally the people aren't fussed by the writing as much, to what the story line is.
I only know this cause my last story that I started got barely any attention, and the only thing I've improved on is a little bit of spelling, and I've got a few more subs on this one xDD

Haha, I agree...it is bittersweet. We're almost done unpacking, haha. We still have cleaning at the Duplex...yuck. Lol. I finished chapter five:). Good luck with your chores! Chores are never fun:(.

Exactly!

Feedback is designed to help writers get better.
It bothers me when you give feedback, and the person doesn't like it and gets annoyed x_x

Ah, thank you. I love it when people actually tell me when I need to improve on something xD

I think I might go through the two chapters and see if I need to change some words, and space it out a little. xP
I have a little problem with doing that.

I can somewhat understand, but in a different way.
My boyfriend is like a child x_x

Thank you, I'll be glad to finally have some xD
I'm not too good at it, but I try xD

xD, well...that's good! Sorry it took me awhile to respond. I had no internet because of the move. We're all moved into our house, just got some boxes around...LOL. My room is all unpacked:). I slept in it Saturday night for the first time. Friday my sister and I slept out in the living room because our beds weren't set up yet, so. But I like my room and our new house and our new town. I kinda miss my old town, but it's nice. Our weekend was busy, busy, busy. And this following weekend is gonna be busy too because we gots to go to Lows and go back to the town we lived in to finish cleaning our Duplex and go to the store for food. We got a new fridge because there wasn't one when we moved in. We have some food because we got some dinner for to night last night but not much. Yesturday when it got here, there wasn't any food in it until last night as I said, xD. Our neighbors are nice so that's good. LOL. Also, I'll probably update my story after we get all settled in:). I'm helping my sister and my mom and dad get all unpacked since I'm finished.

Of course! (: Anytime. Haha I like your style.

YES ! HAHA ;

I don`t have one near me , or I would shop there [:

Hey! (: Thanks bunches for the stories! I REALLY like yours! I haven't started reading the other one yet. But I love your idea and how it's so "right there". Like, that's the way it is. I don't know how to explain it. Haha. The italic is kinda hard to read, but I manage. (: Thank you again!

If it wasn`t for facebook, I would have given up all newer technology & went back to cassette players, typewriters, and house phones. >.<

Oooh, my grandmother likes to shop there [:

I did lose everything, basically. I just have like, certain disks that have things on them that I was supposed to give to friends. Or things emailed to me from other houses that were on my computer. Stuff like that I can get back. But my computer now is virtually new. It's annoying.

Coffee sounds good right now actually. I think I`ll go make some. I hope you have a good day at work. What do you work as ?

hahah awww yeah chores are never fun. lol. soo i have an idea for a story just not sure on it... its about a guy and girl. the guy moves away when they're in like 7th grade and they run into each other in college. they start to develop a friendship and blah blah blah... what do you think?

Lol, you're silly. :P

Yeah, it sucks! But I miss you too! Hopefully it won’t be for much longer.

:( Just without internet at the moment. We’re staying with my dad. :/ But hopefully this doesn’t last long. I’m going crazy over here. I’m at a friend’s house today so hopefully I can get some updates. :D

LOL, it was a typo. I fixed it. Lol. Should there be any commas, when they're getting into the car? Also, I fixed tonight and made it into one word. LOL, you commented yourself?

yep, the story needs to have a plot^.^ not just the same through the whole story

I write love stories, but stuff actually happens in them, there's death, drugs, abuse, all kinds of stuff not just kissing and sex.

yea lol, it's like oh my god, i'm 15, and have no job. I'm gonna fall in love with like...The Rev or some shit like that, im just not into it.

I'll read it(:
What's it called?