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  • shaants_sweetheart

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    Alot...
    Code Geass, Samurai Champloo, Death Note, Blood +, Bleach, Shin Chan, FMA....
    I think thats it....
    You watch any?
    August 12th, 2008 at 07:22am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    Where are you guys moving to?
    Spoon!
    lol..
    Why do you have a pig pic?
    August 12th, 2008 at 07:14am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    I like it....
    I'm mean the whole idea of a fresh start is nice....
    And so is meeting the new people....
    But I just don't like change I guess...
    Does that make sense?
    August 12th, 2008 at 07:04am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    I'm trying to talk my mom into boarding school....
    Mostly because I don't want to move anymore....
    It's Matty's Girl....
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:56am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    Home schooled?
    Do you like that?
    I start the end of August or early September....
    What's your jango user name?
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:51am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    I've been good...
    I got my bookbag today....
    I just don't want to go to school...
    :(
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:43am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    lol I don't read much books but my favorite that I absolutely love is "the Velveteen Rabbit" :)
    I know childish...

    Naw when I read,
    I want to read stories with proper grammar,
    First person POV,
    Must have paragraphs whether they seperate them like I do or not... :)

    I'm just picky... lol...
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:42am
  • shaants_sweetheart

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    Sups?
    lol....
    How ya been?
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:37am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    Teehee thank you =^_^=
    Ya that's why I rewrote it,
    The first plot was stupid lol... :)

    I'd love to read a story about that lol...
    I kind of strict on what I read,
    I'm a picky reader no joke... lol...
    I don't mean to be, just am lol... ^_^
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:17am
  • WayWord

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    thanks
    i actually wrote the poem before i wrote the story
    August 12th, 2008 at 05:52am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    To be honest the original plot line that way very boring,
    Was in Skyler's POV,
    his family's rich...

    His father and grand father always pushing him to be in their business,
    So he's always going to the strip club to piss his father off,
    The news always catches him there,
    And he was infatuated with a certain stripper (hince: the name lol)
    and that's how it was going to be...

    But the first few chapters,
    WERE HELLA BORING,
    So I erased it and did a totally new different plot,
    So I guess that's my inspiration lol...

    The hooker part was only in the begining to show that Tabi had a choice,
    Sleep on the streets and possibly get raped,
    Or go with this strange (but nice) women...
    So she made the right decision, plus her friend got her drunk just so she'd say yes to be a prostitute but sadly it back fired... lol...
    August 12th, 2008 at 05:39am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    Yep I'm back in school... :)

    The story's about a stripper who lived with her (prostitute) roommate,
    When the stripper (Tabi) said "no" to her room mate to be a prostitute too, her room mate kicked her out. Well Tabi met a nice lady who offered her a place to stay, little did she know the drama that would come with living with the lady...

    The lady's son, Skyler, realizes who Tabi is, they both go threw a really horrible event together (that I'm writing now but have some chapters out) it's in an I POV, it's original, the main character is a female but his POV comes and goes but later in the chapters already posted... ^_^
    August 12th, 2008 at 05:19am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    lol polishing your piggy...

    I'm just getting my work done,
    Hoping to graduate early as I've mentioned,
    and write some more chapters for my story "Infatuated With The Stripper" lol...

    Uh... Hmm... What to talk about?
    August 12th, 2008 at 04:24am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    Hiiiii... :)
    Wzup?
    August 12th, 2008 at 03:50am
  • WayWord

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    cool..thanks
    August 12th, 2008 at 12:10am
  • WayWord

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    thanks for the feedback, finally a comment more helpful
    that story is kinda different from my normal writing style, though idk why
    do u kno wat genre that story would fall into?
    August 11th, 2008 at 06:32pm
  • WayWord

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    i'll check it out..i'm gonna post a profile up after i have breakfast
    if u have time, u should go to nanowrimo and read the short story i have up
    i wanted some feedback on it but it's just not happening..i think it's cuz the person who commented about it spoiled the ending o_O
    so if u do read it, don't scroll down lol..btw, its in the novel swap, feedback section
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • WayWord

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    ohhh i see cool
    so have u updated the blog?
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:32pm
  • WayWord

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    heyy
    i just finished leaving u some comments on ur poems
    August 11th, 2008 at 05:05pm
  • Female Stiffler

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    hey...nothing really , thanks for the request , I love the profile pic :P
    August 11th, 2008 at 02:39pm