I like it....
I'm mean the whole idea of a fresh start is nice....
And so is meeting the new people....
But I just don't like change I guess...
Does that make sense?
Teehee thank you =^_^=
Ya that's why I rewrote it,
The first plot was stupid lol... :)
I'd love to read a story about that lol...
I kind of strict on what I read,
I'm a picky reader no joke... lol...
I don't mean to be, just am lol... ^_^
To be honest the original plot line that way very boring,
Was in Skyler's POV,
his family's rich...
His father and grand father always pushing him to be in their business,
So he's always going to the strip club to piss his father off,
The news always catches him there,
And he was infatuated with a certain stripper (hince: the name lol)
and that's how it was going to be...
But the first few chapters,
WERE HELLA BORING,
So I erased it and did a totally new different plot,
So I guess that's my inspiration lol...
The hooker part was only in the begining to show that Tabi had a choice,
Sleep on the streets and possibly get raped,
Or go with this strange (but nice) women...
So she made the right decision, plus her friend got her drunk just so she'd say yes to be a prostitute but sadly it back fired... lol...
The story's about a stripper who lived with her (prostitute) roommate,
When the stripper (Tabi) said "no" to her room mate to be a prostitute too, her room mate kicked her out. Well Tabi met a nice lady who offered her a place to stay, little did she know the drama that would come with living with the lady...
The lady's son, Skyler, realizes who Tabi is, they both go threw a really horrible event together (that I'm writing now but have some chapters out) it's in an I POV, it's original, the main character is a female but his POV comes and goes but later in the chapters already posted... ^_^
I'm just getting my work done,
Hoping to graduate early as I've mentioned,
and write some more chapters for my story "Infatuated With The Stripper" lol...
thanks for the feedback, finally a comment more helpful
that story is kinda different from my normal writing style, though idk why
do u kno wat genre that story would fall into?
i'll check it out..i'm gonna post a profile up after i have breakfast
if u have time, u should go to nanowrimo and read the short story i have up
i wanted some feedback on it but it's just not happening..i think it's cuz the person who commented about it spoiled the ending o_O
so if u do read it, don't scroll down lol..btw, its in the novel swap, feedback section
Code Geass, Samurai Champloo, Death Note, Blood +, Bleach, Shin Chan, FMA....
I think thats it....
You watch any?