i would LOVE to see nick nd kylee together still, nd the thing i loved the most about this chapter was that nick finally got the truth, which was kylee was a cheater!
you are most definatrly not a bad writer. i love your story its sooo good! kylee is probably my favorite character cuz she just goes thru all of this unexpected stuff and that keeps it interresting and entertaining. i kinda like her with joe, just cuz you can tell the amount of passion they have when together, but like i said before, i like stuff to be unexpected. i enjoy the suspence. oh, and yes, i will tell people about your story.
uhhmm I havent had a lot of time to read lately i'm so busy I'm trying to get caught up and post new stories so i'll be caught up by Thanksgiving Day sorry about the wait...xox Liz
I like that they're actually believable and not completely far-fetched like a lot of fan fics are. they're pretty easy to relate to and you could imagine yourself in that situation.
6.what do you like about kyleelovesjb21's stories? is there anything you would change? add?
What I like about them?! well they are different. I say I like most stories since they are not my ideas and well everyone's got their own point of views.
I would separate paragraphs a bit more and I would put a bit more effort capitalizing names... that's it.
hmmm about Nick finding out?! I think that's up to you really.