yo. i dont know you but i saw you commenting on my friend's poems and it seemed like constructive criticism (sp?) so could you comment on mine, please?
Yum yum yum-away! I fancy the new specimem =D i mean hav u seen him runnin? Wiv top half dne up? I mean like OMFG! Xx i dnt undrstand. Y the elbow? Ppl can touch that by accident 2! Y not ur hands + then wash them? Why not sneeze ova ur enemys + giv them....SWINE FLU!! Lol x
hey your two new poems are really good ... couldnt be bothered to comment seperately ... i just wrote a couple of new ones please read ...'Something I Wrote...My Suicide Note' and 'Nobodys Whore' Please I really wanna know whatcha think