Sydders09 / Comments

Great, I was hoping for an answer like that.
Right now they haven't been provoked so they're at a calm point.
I'm about to go and put up another chapter.

Good to know.
Anyways after reading my story what did you think about my interpurtation of vampires?

Well I'm sure it will.

But I think you should make something shocking happen like, a big yellow bus! You know outta nowhere never saw that coming kinda thing to make it more interesting.

However that's just what I think and you don't have to take my advice on it.

Well I hope it gets interesting, cause I hate to say this, but I think I might be loosing interest.

Uh, well kinda, but like where are you taking it, she knows his secret and what happens to make the plot thicker...ya feel me?

I haven't read chapter five yet, but I uh like it the way it is so far.
So where do you plan on taking the story though???

Yeah, thanks.
I commented your story did ya get them???

ooo im so sorry uve never been 2 a jb concert??

Well what I meant by stronger was, not cry and whine or be scared so easily.

Like she can stand on her own two feet and say what's on her mind kinda thing, but I was planning on taking it a little slow.

Thanks for your input too! ^.^

Thanks.

So how do you like my characters? I think Shayla is a bit of a wimp, so I'm gonna toughen her up a bit.

No problem. Seriously, your story was Great!

Good, good.
I'm going to put another chapter up in a minute...so you'll know a smidge more lol.

LOL get some confidence and just drive! LOL I support you.

Anyways yeah I know little info is given, but it's working since your hooked.
I can give you a better summary of it if you want, it won't give away much, in fact it won't give away anything come to think about it...lol

Oh no! Your one of those people that has to hold onto the wheel with both hands! LOL, well that won't ever change until you drive.

Anyways, I saw you commented my vampire story, so honestly what do you think?

I drive a jacked-up chevy truck and I fly in that thing.
You won't get the full affect of the hand out the window until your the one driving, it just doesn't feel the same.

I drive everywhere I can go man, it's fun with a rush and thrill, besides you'll never get over driving until you do it.

But my favorite thing to do is turn on my favorite radio station or put in my favorite CD and roll the windows down and just go.

I mean I stick my one hand out the window and watch it fly, it's the best feeling ever...well I take that back riding a horse is, but still...

That's what I said, of course I wasn't afraid of driving, BUT! I said that what's the point of driving I got nowhere to go.

Man I'm hardly ever home...I'm always off doing something, but I know a lot of people who are scared of driving for some very odd reason.

Thanks =], i really like ur story about alex the vampire:D hope u write more soon.

Okay great!
How can you hate driving?
That instills the biggest freedom of your life!

Yeah I don't either, but I still wouldn't.
Anyways, I put my vampire story up, if ya want to give it a go...