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  • wowlikewoah

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    Where did you gooooooooo?! Crying or Very sad
    January 14th, 2013 at 01:04am
  • ashleygreenethebest

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    I think if you are going to write another story, it should be about either Louis or Harry, just because they're my favorites. However, I'd read about any one of them :)
    July 12th, 2012 at 05:42pm
  • wowlikewoah

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    Why thank you! And I missed you too! :D

    When I saw that you had posted three chapters, I freaked out and was like “Oh god, she’s gonna think that I didn’t like them! Why didn’t I say I was going on vacation?! !” and then repeatedly hit my head on the wall while muttering “stupid, stupid” over-and-over again. :p

    Yeah, I’m an only child so I’m a complete sucker when it comes to all that sweet, over-protective brother stuff in books and movies and then all my friends with siblings are like “yeah…that’s not real life, sweetie” in a very condescending tone. :/

    Anyways, I cannot wait to see how these last 2 chapters play out! Aside from the Jiall thing (which is pretty much causing me to shake with anticipation to see how you’re going to bring that about) I honestly don’t have even the slightest hunch of how things are going to wrap up. No doubt though, you’ll make it amazing :)
    July 4th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • saudade.

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    Oh, please! It's a pleasure to comment on such a well written story! I'm looking forward to another update!
    June 25th, 2012 at 11:43pm
  • wowlikewoah

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    Haha. Is it sad that I get almost as excited for your comments back as I do a chapter? It’s nice when they contain those delicious spoilers and honestly, you’re funny as hell : )
    Also, I totally understand what you mean about the comments. I’ve been writing fan-fics for probably like 4 or 5 years now (for bands like My Chemical Romance, Avenged Sevenfold, the Jonas Brothers…I’ve gone through a lot of phases lol) but I would literally rather jump into a tank of cockroaches than show them to any of my real life friends. I’m not ashamed or anything, but I know that it’s just not something they would understand or really be into, so sometimes those comments are all ya got to go on :)

    And thank you, I would love/be honored to have a character in the story! (but I also understand if it doesn’t work out, so no worries). When I posted my comment I saw that she had answered like 3 minutes before me and I was all “@#$%^&*()(*&!” and ran around the house breaking all the glass I could get my hands on ( ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) lol Also, I do love me some Jack Johnson so I can’t judge your friends for that, but I do judge them for talking that way :p lol j/k But yeah, Ed has really blown up lately. He’s everywhere! (deservedly so, but still. haha) I’m going to be seeing him in September and I’m stoked! :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • Meme1362000

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    I've been trying to pitch him to the ppl in my life as well. And Ann is fantastic.
    June 20th, 2012 at 01:05am
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    Just cause this is bugging me, chapter 11's title credit is by The Killers :) and I have read the update but I will comment extensively on the story.
    June 14th, 2012 at 06:49am
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    Way to ruin my lifeeee! Just kidding. Your story is different and I think that's what stands out in comparison to other stories :) I really look forward to what else you have planned!
    June 14th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • saudade.

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    Oh my God! Is she preggers!? Or is it more canon, like Lou's step-parents divorce?
    June 14th, 2012 at 02:50am
  • wowlikewoah

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    haha I'm sure it will! Can't wait to see who it is!
    Have fun on your vacation! We will be anxiously awaiting your return :p
    June 2nd, 2012 at 05:42am
  • INFJSlytherin

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    Haha I think we're all a little bi-polar at one point in time Wink and your welcome! You whole heartily deserve the praise Mr. Green Can't wait to see who you've chosen to be with JJ Very Happy
    June 1st, 2012 at 01:48am
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    Hiya mind reading some of my 1D stories? :)
    May 7th, 2012 at 05:56am
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    I just wanted to tell you I love your stories and thank you, the little mention of Alex DeLeon in What You Do to me was the final price of the puzzle that lead me to listening to The Cab. I just got to see their first Australian show ever and meet him and Joey yesterday. It was amazing so thank you.
    February 26th, 2012 at 01:37pm
  • MusicMamaE

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    Thanks! And yep, I'm planning on a four chapter follow-up. :D <3
    April 8th, 2011 at 10:29pm
  • doyleangel

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    Hi there. Just letting you know that I still hope you plan to update "Painting Flowers!"
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:52pm
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    uhm, yeah so you should update!
    December 14th, 2010 at 07:58am
  • erratic

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    To be honest, I'm jealous of Jack and Zooey's relationship, too. lol. Since they moved in together really soon, I feel the need to explain how they grew so close in such little time. Plus it's fun writing no-drama cuteness.

    Thank you so much for the feedback!
    September 1st, 2010 at 05:33am
  • erratic

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    !!!
    I hope that the chapter I posted helps you in the inspiration department. Lord knows that I'm [i]really[/i] anxious to read more of "Painting Flowers". Travis and Jency make an absolutely lovely couple.

    I like the new ATL song. I agree that it isn't the best that they've done, but I'm nonetheless excited about the new record.
    August 17th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • erratic

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    Hehe.
    I'm glad you liked Jack's mini-freak out over the date. As you can see, Zooey's made quite an impression on him, so he's determined to do the same to her. I'm still working on their actual date chapter, but from what I have done, it's going to be worth the wait.

    :D

    Thanks a billion for the feedback!
    August 5th, 2010 at 10:17pm
  • erratic

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    Just read your comment on "Made For Each Other".
    You're right about the ridiculousness. There's going to me A LOT of it in the story. With all the drama that's ensued in "Decisions, Decisions", I'm ready to write something a bit more light-hearted and fun.

    Thank you for all the support!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 04:35pm