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Aww, of course I'm going to stick with you!
You're a [b]lovely[/b] writer, and easily one of my favorites on Mibba.

I'm SUPER STOKED to find out how "What You Do To Me" ends, as well as where you're going to take the story in the sequel :D

Woohoo!
I'm super stoked that you liked "Decisions, Decisions" as well as "Made For Each Other".

In regards to the latter, I thought it was about time to try writing in the male perspective again. It's a lot more fun than I remember, plus getting in touch with my inner Jack Barakat should be quite interesting.

Thank you for the comments, yo!
I REALLY, [b]REALLY[/b] appreciate them.

Hehe.
"The no pants dance". I don't know about writing [i]every[/i] chapter like this one, because I don't want to be responsible for readers' pants spontaneously exploding. BUT I'm really glad that you liked this update so much.

:D

COOL BEANS!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapter so much. I felt like Zooey needed a bit of the spotlight since she has such an interesting relationship with Chloe. It was ridiculously fun writing this chapter.

Alex will get his share of excitement, though. Don't worry :)

Thank you again for another lovely comment!

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http://stories.mibba.com/read/291559/What-Makes-It-Wrong-For-Us-To-Fall-In-Love/

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That sounds insanely good. ::D

Cool beans!
I'm glad that you liked how Alex and Chloe's ~first date went. Since perfection is overrated, I decided to shake things up just a bit :D

As always, thank you for the feedback!

Thank you so much for the comment! :) I'm glad you're liking the story.

Hearing things from Alex's POV would be lovely. And a third part in the series? That's FANTASTIC. I feel honored that I'm the first to hear about it.

Aww, you're lucky that the guys got to come out at Bamboozle Roadshow. When I went, Only sidestage, Forrest from HGB, and Caleb and Kyle from FTSK wandered around. They didn't let most of the big bands out into the field because it'd cause such a scene (as proved by the mob of screaming girls chasing after Kyle).

Hehe.
I feel like fluffy cuteness is one of my specialties, so I'm glad that this chapter was up to your standards. And I agree that s'mores with ATL would be the best day ever :D

And since you mentioned Jack and Zooey, I'm actually thinking of writing a spinoff of their relationship. I have a tiny bit written, but I'm not sure if it'll ever see the light of day. If it does, you'll be the first to hear about it.

The shout out for your writing was honestly no problem. You're easily one of my favorite writers on Mibba, and you definitely deserve more recognition for your stories.

Aww, I'm really stoked that you enjoyed the chapter I posted. I'm aware of how long you've all been waiting for Alex and Chloe to get back together, so I wanted everything to be perfect when it happened.

You're right. I'm not one for sunshine and rainbows, but for now I'll give them the cute honeymoon stage of their relationship :D

Thanks for commenting!

Sigh. I will always want Alex and Jency to have babies. But like you said, the story isn't over yet. ;;D

Yep. There was A LOT of drunken havoc wreaked around the house. Two broken chairs and the vomit-ridden couch were only a peek of damage caused at the party.

More Alex/Chloe cuteness is heading your way, so stay tuned!

You are correct. LOTS of shenanigans will occur at Chloe's party.

If you don't mind my asking, who do you think the surprise guests are? I won't be able to confirm or deny your prediction, but I'm kind of curious to what you're thinking.

No problem.

As I've said before, I love where you're going with the story.

Don't compromise your writing for other people. You're doing a wonderful job with 'What You Do To Me.' You've been saying from the get go that Alex won't be a big part of the story, so it's a shame that readers are trying to sway you otherwise :(


You can't always get what you want, but that doesn't mean you can't be happy. This story illustrates that point perfectly.

As always, I can't wait to read more of your writing.

I don't mind that you're going to use "Therapy." In fact, I'm really anxious to read what you have in store with it :)

I'm really glad that you're like where Decisions, Decisions is headed.
Thank you for commenting!

"Walls" is one of my favorites by ATL, too. While listening to Nothing Personal, I thought that a lot of songs would work with Alex and Chloe's situation, but once it started playing, I KNEW I had to include it in the story somewhere.

Thank you so much for your feedback :)

Although Alex is a cutie, I love where you're taking the story with Travis. He's the ray of sunshine Jency needs in order to get over the break up.

Haha.
Rian chasing after Terra was one of my favorite parts, too. And yes, Zack is dating a girl who sells ice cream for a living :D

There will also be a lot more Chloe and Alex cuteness/awkwardness in the following chapters.

PS. What You Do To Me is easily becoming one of my favorite stories on Mibba. Travis is just too adorable to resist.