Hey, again I'm super super happy that you like my updates and that you write such good feedback. I guess by the "new unexpected story twist" you mean her breaking her foot? Anyway, thanks again :D
Thanks for commenting on "In Venere Veritas". I'm glad you thought it was hot - I was wondering if it would come out as pathetic ;) And I am also truly happy that you wonder if it was indeed a dream, that was also partly the intention of the last lines.
Thanks for your comment :) It is very therapeutic, I just needed to finally get everything off my chest and out into the open. It feels like a weight being lifted.
Hey, I want to thank you for the comment on my story. Reading your observations puts the whole thing in perspective for me, so keep it up and the whole thing will improve, I'm sure ;)
I'm so happy that you seemed to enjoy chapter nine. I was a bit uncertain if I chose the right words and if the tension would be recognizable - and if people got the fact that Zoe is keeping something to herself - so I am absolutely thrilled about your observations.
I'm really happy that you noticed those two parts of the story! I was hoping that it wouldn't be seen as a filler and people could read the developement of characters and their relationships, so thank you!
Thanks again for the comment on In Venere Veritas. I know I write this every time you comment, but that's because I'm so grateful that you actually take time to read and comment.
Thanks for the comment once again. I feel that it flows pretty well when I write it, too, so I'm glad that it's also apparent in the style. And I'm genuinly happy that you seem to like my Ville character, because I wasn't sure if he was believable or not.
you know, I get what you mean in a sense. I think subconsciously made it so it reads that way when i wrote it. i wanted to lose that for a little. seeing as everything was so dramatic, i wanted the recovery from all of that to be a lot more deep and emotional. thats why everything happens so fast i think. more traumatic, shocking, different from the rest. I promise the feeling will come back. :) thanks for the feedback!
hey, I just wanted to say thanks for the comment and that we really appreciate you reading. Hope we're living up to our previous work. keep on commenting <3
Thanks for the comment. I love the fact that you also give me constructive critism - now I know what to pay attention to, future do's and don't's. You're an absolute darling :]
I'm so happy to hear that :) I'm just afraid I'll disappoint y'all, but we'll see how everything turns out. If you'd like, we could do a bit of brainstorming about how "Something Like Fun" can turn out. It would be absolutely amazing if we could get you writing again - for closure, at least. Anyway, I'm just about to update In Venere Veritas again :D
Hey, I just want to thank you for subscribing to "In Venere Veritas". I adored your 'Something Like Fun' and am so sorry you never really fininshed it :(
just so annoying.. I hate that bitch who doesn't even know what I write... and she just read a entry about a story... stupid girl... why would you read an entry that is not meant for you...
anyway I'm still piss and I can't believe how such a people live in this world. I'll be updating Lj...since that place is the only place where you can write freely...
seriously I have a thing to mibba now
just letting you know...I won't be posting any stories to mibba...at least now. Cause people are not nice anymore. I've been reported and also in my entry about this problem some people complained... they think I should not post a story with a horrible grammer. So sorry for my stupid stories...
thanks! i didn't feel that the last chapter was the best, i guess it's where it was so important or whatever but i was anxious that no one will like it.