Hm, I'm not really sure what kind of advice to give. As far as plots go, basically even the most cliche stories get comments (most times depending on fan fics) and sometimes even the most horribly written stories get comments.
Basically all I can offer is give enough details, and if you want more views/comments then try and get your story out as much as you can. Like your signature and such.
And definitely put it in whatever genres is belongs in. And by all means give at least a little bit of what the story is about. From what I've seen, most people won't bother to read a story if it only has "I don't want to give anything away so just read it!"
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Basically all I can offer is give enough details, and if you want more views/comments then try and get your story out as much as you can. Like your signature and such.
And definitely put it in whatever genres is belongs in. And by all means give at least a little bit of what the story is about. From what I've seen, most people won't bother to read a story if it only has "I don't want to give anything away so just read it!"