Echo Lawrence / Comments

yes it was on that occasion..

:D

hehe..

ozymandias..

hehe..

can you comment pls.. on the poems..

so many people will be encouraged..

^_^

that is excellent!..

and thanks dude!

:D

you like umm.. like dark unsettled poems ryt?

pls read..

discrimination
stop pretending
i hate all of you..

:D

thanks

i see..

well good luck with that.

oh did you read my oceanic experience poem??

pls read it and comment your reaction..

what kind of crisis..?

pls visit aspachealth.com

my dad's sight..

we sell coffee

XD

just fine..

i'm concentrating in literature...

XD that's why no fs nor YM

it's a poem i submitted... is it a poem???

sudden dismay
very very short time of display...

i wake up everyday..
a sheer of cold strike the bane...

thy goal is to become great..
or to find love when the time is too late..

thy ornaments are worn...
my ring is silver and it's getting old..

my shirt is plain as hay..
thy wisdom is blurred by dismay...

i joust with my fellow men..
thy assault sticks with the pain...

every mistake is criticized...
but feeling are just too mesmerized...

the green feeling of a selfish self..
brings guilt and a unending disgrace...

apologize thy heart wishes...
but thy mind's bliss teases..

thy blood flows..from the effect of the den..
thy veins shalt erupt..to the fission of the pen...

vain of the sorrow... but experience of the man..
chill of the hail... but surprise of the end...

you concentrate to erase..
but lies will make it stay..

you let your guard down..to the end of thy chase .
but assaults are just too unmodified..and too hard to explain/.

hey! thanx for commenting on my newest story! haha.. :D i'm soo loving your profile..and ur "My Alibi" inspired story. Stay cool!

Thanks for the welcome :)
What's up?

P.S. And can I just say that your icon of Gerard there in your info is possibly my FAVORITE icon in the whole world and I absolutely freaked like a fangirl when I saw it? 8D?

And I'm Rina. Nice to meet you Justine.

Hi! thanks for welcoming me to mibba

hehe.....my stories are gonna be wierd hehe...

hi justine!! :D
hehe..e2 na comment q..hihi,..
thnx 4 inspiring me 2 write hir on mibba.com!
:D haha..cge, cge..

yNgatz..;)

hey justine!! ^_^ thnx 4 sharin' mibba.com :]
tC!! :D

hey! thanks for the welcome ^^ im doing pretty awesome.. =D how about you?

thank you very much i'm glad you liked and read it and take all the time you need to read the other one lol its not going anywhere

Thanks for your comment on my story :)