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do u think i should rewrite it though? make it longer? haha

oh and yea clearly not many ppl know :))

hahaha thnx gab :))

hahaha i never knew you had a mibba account! :))

I understand. ahaha. I hate reading about main characters I'm not interested in.

Into the sunshine, posted it last week, I think? Tell me if you like it, and I'll post the second chapter. (:

Thanks so much for the story comment. :]

haha, I'm so sorry! I posted a fairly new one recently, did you read it?

Thanks for the comment! It means alot. :)

Your amazing! Just so you know that!

Thanks for the story comment!

haha, I wasn't sure anyone still read it. Possibly soon? (:
Thanks, by the way.

cool i will

no problem!

I love the story =)
But I think you should write in like, paragraphs so it wont be as hard to read and understand. Also. It would make it better if you put a little more detail. But yeah, it's a great plot so far and I cant wait for more =)))

Sure i love reading stories from other jonas brothers fans :)

hi! just commenting back on your story. it looks great so far, but tips I would give you are to have paragraphs so it's easy to read, um, punctuation, capitilization, because I know if you don't do that, or you don't edit, and Mibba finds out, they will remove your story, and also, do you have a plot for the story yet? but it's awesome so far!!! keep up the good work!

love,

karli <3

kewl story! :]

hey dude! the story is nice :D

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