Thank you so much. Here's the layout with the summary, if you wish to take a bit of a look at it. It is, of course, a very rough draft, but it's my favorite story of all; especially because of how close Louis gets to her little sister, it's just... beautiful. http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/459512/Where-Dreams-Come-True/
I must warn you; there are some pretty sad things in there. the plot is very nice, very beautiful, though... It's basically the guys going to Disneyland, and Louis meets a girl who does of Tinkerbell. They becomes friends very easily, and as he gets to know her she tells him about her little sister; she wants him to meet her. The bad part? Um, her little sister is... sick. And when Louis enters the room his face falls, because she's in the bed, with a machine attached and no hair whatsoever but the little girl is just [i]so happy[/i] to see him...
I wanted to write this because... well. I had a cousin who had her same state, and she wanted to meet Miley Cyrus just so bad. She never got the chance though, so I feel like I'm doing a little tribute writing this story. Eventually, of course, the girl dies, but Louis is there to comfort her big sister, Tinkerbell. Is just... those kind of stories that make you cry a lot but smile at the smae time; because it's beautiful, because is sad, because is [i]real[/i].
I laughed a lot with this chapter, and I think, well, I wanted people to denote how Louis starts to fight for her, to get serious for her. It's sad, though, that he doesn't get the chance as he thought on the Jude's House. :/
I put more emphasis on Louis' warmth for Eva, and I very much loved to see you commented on it :) Liam's point of view will be very detailed, seeing as Eva is completely clueless and oblivious to everything around her. There's also a Louis Fanfiction later on the series, in which he implies when he fell in love with her. I can't wait to write it :D
.A year ago A girl named Kathy was hated by everyone. Everyone made fun of her. She was ignored. Even by messages. One day she decided to kill herself. Because even her parents ignored her. She jumed out her window. No one noticed utill people started dissapearing. Kathy haunted them. She made them suffer like the way she did. She hung them slowly and stabed them over and over very slowly so they could suffer like she did.
If you don't send this message to 15 diffrent comments you will die tonight by Kathy. Because she considers it ignooring her.
Example 1:
Dave looked at the first sentece and said,"Spam"And the next day the neighbors found him in his backyard, dead.
Example 2:
Joane was alone. She didn't have kids or a husband. She had alot of friends. When She had a sleepover with them she quickly had to check her e-mail.She saw this message and sent it to only 6 people because she thought she couldn't die that night beacuse she was surounded by people. The next morning Joane's friends found her in her bathtub, dead
Hey, Just thought I'd stop by and let you know that Just Give Up is going to be updated later tonight and that Chapter 9 has been already posted if you haven't read that yet. [:
Thank you! :) I love it too; how Eva has no clue about Louis. There are a lot of things that she didn't notice at all. On the next chapter very much too. What I really cannot wait for, is the day they first kiss. Is really sad but funny at the same time :)