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    I don't think I'm going to be posting any more of it on Mibba Sad But I totally want your thoughts on the rest of it!!! I've currently only got one more chapter to write, but I've had my doubts about the story, and hearing your feedback has made me just want to finish it and love the story XD
    February 8th, 2016 at 04:29am
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    I dunno if you're still online, but omg your story comment In Love Arms Arms Arms Arms Arms Arms Arms Arms
    February 8th, 2016 at 04:18am
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    @ dawn of light
    Haha yay! Thank you! Mr. Green
    February 7th, 2016 at 04:13pm
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    100% YES YES YES
    I just saw it and I'm excited tehe
    February 7th, 2016 at 04:50am
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    Thank you so much for your comment on The Victrix. I'll fix the mistake! Smile
    February 2nd, 2016 at 02:19am
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    Thanks for the comment on Alive! That one sentence definitely should be "my" in it; I always write in third person and I kept falling back into it while I was writing. I thought I caught all my mistakes but apparently not XD
    February 2nd, 2016 at 01:48am
  • orange county.

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    I didn't understand it at first. I thought it was just a coincidence that everyone that was getting their entries in were the people who had the same one as me. lmfao Thank you, although I really felt like mine was incomplete. I was just adamant that I was going to make it exactly one thousand words.

    I don't think the university would actually fund a paper, unfortunately. I'm not part of any clubs, actually. There's a creative writing society, but I'm the worst person to join something like that. Every time we met, I'd be like, no, I haven't written anything. XD

    Max Loosten is a cool character. I love the idea of a story where he's detective-ing, and maybe she's off trying to figure out her birthmark, Lara Croft-ing all over the world, and then everything becomes linked together. That's how I envisioned their future anyway, haha.

    Phones are the worst. But, I know couldn't survive without one.
    January 6th, 2016 at 02:33pm
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    Of course. It was really well done.
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:54am
  • dawn of light

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    Cute you should totally let me know when you do because I'm really interested in his character (anything investigator related Weird)
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:49am
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    @ dawn of light
    Dude. I'm so tempted, haha. Max has been in my miscellaneous pile of characters for years and now it feels like he could serve a purpose. And I have ideas of fleshing it out. ........ so maybe....
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:43am
  • dawn of light

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    Of course Cute

    But really, are you planning on making it a full story? Weird
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:41am
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    @ dawn of light

    No problem! I was actually looking at all the "TEST COMMENTS" and now I understand hahaha. I was just saying thank you for your comment on Begin! I'm so glad you liked it!!
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:39am
  • dawn of light

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    I couldn't see your comment on my profile because it glitches Sad so sorry about that!
    January 6th, 2016 at 05:37am
  • orange county.

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    I think it's going to be really good for me to do. Speaking of cool contests, we both entered an awesome one! I think it's going to be a really fun one, and it's such a good idea. I was actually planning on hosting a contest where the entrants have to comment on each other's entries, so it was cool to see there was one I could enter first.

    I haven't, but I do have a module called News and Feature Writing next semester. I'm so excited for it! There's alos a film journalism module I'm considering taking next year. I wish we had school paper over here, but we don't. It sucks, I'd love to do something like that. It sounds like so much fun, even though I'm dreadful at being given responsibilities.

    Back at you. Begin has some of the best sentences I've ever read in my life in it.

    I got a new phone, which has been a saviour and a delight. My old one kicked the bucket big time.
    January 5th, 2016 at 05:54pm
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    Thank you so much for the comment on Immortal!
    January 2nd, 2016 at 11:33pm
  • orange county.

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    Keep working on it, it'll get there. I'm glad it's going well!

    It's so weird how you can think you're into one thing but really your insides are like, no, this is what you actually like.

    Likewise, it was nice reading your comment. Thanks for that!

    How was your Christmas, anyway? And what are your plans for New Years? I actually don't like New Years, so I will be sitting alone at home watching TV.
    December 30th, 2015 at 03:00pm
  • orange county.

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    Merry belated Christmas to you too! I hope you had a good one.

    This is different. I knew I couldn't be too social, deep down, but I can keep this writing thing up. And you can too! Motivational! Journalism? How's that going?

    To be honest, I'd probably like Interstellar. I'm just a little brat and I see the space and I go nope, no, no, no even though I'd probably enjoy the film. I blame my Dad for his whole space thing he had when I was growing up. Everything had aliens in it, or spaceships.

    I just posted the most unapologetically ridiculously gushy comment on your story. I meant every word. I had to go a little crazy to make up for the fact I never even recc'd or subscribed when I first read it. Bad reader alert.
    December 27th, 2015 at 04:03pm
  • orange county.

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    Hahaha, me too!

    Thank you for reading, by the way, although I'm hugely embarrassed by everything I post.

    I feel that. I'm constantly writing essays, luckily the writing side of my degree keeps me writing fiction too. Although most of it is horrendous. I haven't even tried to get into shape, or to write anything worthwhile. New Year, new start though. I think the blog is really going to help me keep on top of things.

    I haven't seen Interstellar. I'm actually not that into space and sci-fi and stuff, DON'T KILL ME! The amount of people that try to kill me when I admit that is ridiculous. I can't even really explain why I don't, I just kind of switch off when it comes to that stuff.

    I followed fictitiousb, which I always call fictitious bitch in my head for some reason. That has nothing to do with you, and everything to do with how my brain works. I noticed you uploaded a couple of stories which I have read but am yet to comment on so I can gush about how much I love them. But I do love them, so there shouldn't be a long wait until I'm gushing. I've been writing something that I plan on uploading here, there's this contest that's supposed to last all year so I'm planning to enter it and then I'll have an upload a month from now until next December!
    December 22nd, 2015 at 03:48pm
  • orange county.

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    So I have done nothing I set out to... Facepalm

    Please tell me you accomplished a whole bunch of reading and writing and getting into shape? Let me live vicariously through your success! XD I knew this would happen when I started uni again.

    Did you get into Fear the Walking Dead? I still haven't seen a single episode of it. I have, however, been loving season 2 of iZombie. Oh, and How to Get Away with Murder. And most importantly, Scream Queens. I love Scream Queens. Tell me you've been watching it!

    I set up that wordpress blog in the end if you're still interested. It's bloodyoctopusmurder.wordpress.com. The only thing I've posted is an 'About' page, but I'll get to updating in the next week. And from them on there should be weekly updates. I really want to start a story on here too, commit myself to something again.
    November 8th, 2015 at 02:31am