... Sage would have had to hit her pretty hard for that. Bahaha, it could have happened, I s'pose, but I think the brief description kind of sums up what happened in Johnny's intoxicated state. I think.
I've been okay. I'm about to get sick. I can feel it, but overall, I'm good. And you? (:
Well, I mean, it's the beginning of the climax. It's gonna get even more blown out of proportion and stuff.
Yeah, everyone's about to do some stupid shit. Not even gonna lie. (;
Hi there!
I know this is random, but a while ago I wrote this story, Letters to My Heart, and you seemed to like it...
I just wanted to say that I'm rewriting it, and would love your feedback.
(:
by other treatments she refused it was ones like chemo and radiation. In the next few chapters you'll see why she didn't want them, so i wont give them up. She still does have hair though because she's not gonna go through chemo
lol i guess it is cool, but everything is so different, especially the spelling, and some of the words used to describe stuff, is so different from what i would usually say lol,
Absolutely. Like I said, some minor things that will happen in a story are alright, but if there happens something major all of a sudden, which doesn't have to go anything wth the actual plot of the story, it just confuses the readers. So I am glad that there are at least some authors that plan things really through. Haha, OCD in planning? Why not, then you don't have to worry about that you'll make random stuff pop up.
Haha, it's no problem. That shows that I'm really into the story.
Yea, sometime authors make random thing appear that totally don't make any sense in that context. I mean if that is picked up later at some point in the story, it might be alright, but having it just like that. Meh, I don't know. I rather have a story that's more planned :)
I'm so very glad that you're attentive like that. ;D
See, how could I stop thanking you, dude? I'm just so glad that you enjoy the story so much. Good readers reminds me why I post in the first place, so I've gotta make sure I show my appreciation. (:
I had a Bri layout for a little while, but the picture that the person used, like, expired, so I made the switch and am not disappointed. <3
Aw, you're really welcome :)
I really enjoy it, as it's different than other stories. I mean there are several 'maid stories' where the main girl becomes the guys' maid, but this is a completely different approach. And I really like stories that have a different approach.