haha yeah I liked it. I definitely think they had sex at the right time because there's that physical/lusty thing going on that has to be addressed. But yeah all caught up :)
Sometimes I like reading a story with a bad ending; it's one of those things where it's kind of out of the norm, and it's a nice reminder that "hey...sometimes bad things do happen and everything isn't always happy go lucky."
Yea that really does make sense. Kind of something where you want to be surprised yourself as to what happens next and to know what the back story is, but at least you can take pride in writing something so wonderful, right? Haha.
I know what you mean as far as getting it down on paper, actually writing (as opposed to typing) can be a pain on the ass, but you can be rest assured it won't disappear if your computer crashes (again, been there done that and it is the LAMES).
I hate it when you work on something for so long only to have it disappear. Sometimes if I type something up I save it as a draft in my email that way it won't be completely gone.
I'm glad the reviews perked your day. Reviews do that to me as well, it's like "hey someone really is reading what I'm writing and taking the time to review."
I apologize! You don't have to reply to my reviews if you're not up to it. I know I've reviewed like crazy, but I feel bad when I read a particularly good story and not review. I'm almost religious about it.
Your point og Kevin and Dee never seeming to get back together deffinitely comes through in the story; very understandable. I think you did amazing well. As for the Joe thing, what you just explained makes me just as curious to read more. Trust me, I'm sure more than just a few of us readers appreciate the fact you factored in they are a band and that you had them progress rather than stay in a certain image. Know waht I mean?
Ahhh, computer crashing sucks, especially wheny ou have stories that you'll never get back. I've had to deal with that a time or two so I said "Fuck it. I'm just write them on paper then type 'em up."
I think (hope) Nick will be mature enough to handle a long distance relationship with a somewhat older girl. Speaking of age: Why do you think it is that a it's perfectly fine for a male to be the older partner, but if it's a female it's looked at in a bad way?
Yyyyea, Smile Like You Mean It I just finished up reading and I was heavily surprised. I figured it would turn out badly, I didn't see their relationship holding anything of substance but DAAAAAMN that was a smack in the face. I loved it. Those are the kinds of things I appreciate.
Anywho, no problem...if you want me to chill on reviews I can, I just don't want to be a shitty non reviewer on stories I enjoy reading.
I can't say I know too much about Greg Garbo ...or the Jonas Brothers for that matter. I'm relatively new as far as the Jonas Brothers go. Honestly? When I heard about them I kind of...made fun of them. Which is bad of me, and I still poke fun, but somewhere along the way I got sucked into the craze, and I honestly don't even know how it happened. My words bit me in the ass BIG TIME. But what I DO know, Kevin is my favorite. I can respect Nick a great deal, simply for the fact that for his age he's a fairly decent song writer. He's just a kid, and from what I hear with this new album I'm slightly blown away. He's really somber looking and quiet...that intrigues me a bit. Like I said, I'm new to the fandom...and would probably enjoy it more if I could find more people who weren't so...naive. I know that sounds terrible, but hey, I'm not here to be anybody's hero. ENOUGH about my "Jonas History" ...or lack there of.
I think you more than succeeded when it comes to what you try to accomplish. I'm not tired of reading the same dude because of the different personas you've given so kudos.
Yea, I'm more into indie type bands, alternative etc. like Modest Mouse and Tub Ring...hence why I make fun of Jonas Brothers. But I s'pose a little dose of pop music never hurt anybody. Everybody's got a guilty pleasure or two, so I guess the only thing to do is embrace it and accept it haha.
No problem. "Taken" was one of my favorites stories to read. It was definitely an unconventional way for them to meet and fall, and for that I was pretty much grateful; a breathe of fresh air and any other cliche term that would fit that situation. In fact, it was kind of unconventional as a whole which is a good thing don't get me wrong! I loved every bit of it. I loved the fact you took "the road less traveled" with a story. It was great.
As an added note: I usually just read a fan fic centered around my favorite band member. As far as the Jonas Brothers go it's Kevin who seems to be forgotten as far as I see (but then again I've only really delved into JoBro fandom recently) and I thought it was IMPOSSIBLE to find a good Kevin story. But I found yours and all is right with the world.
Like I said I'm going to take a gander at the other stories you have (I've already started reading Porcelain Face and I'm almost done so expect some feedback on that). Including ones NOT revolved around the oldest brother.
Aaaaand sorry for that novel of a comment that jumped around everywhere.
RE: Remembering Sunday. There was an interview with AWG where they asked if RS and Vegas were about the same girl and he said "Yes, they're about the same person" and the interviewer was like "And she's dead right?" and AWG's got got HUGE and he was like "WHAT? NO! WHAT?" And bestie goes "she's not dead? I thought she was dead." And he's just like "No. What?" over and over again
yeah i know, i'm making my way through them too. i've been reading the first one all day, though, and i have too much work to do to finish all the others, but they will get read eventually!!!
so i just read your story folie a deux and OMG it was incredible. i read it all today...i was hooked! you have an amazing talent, my dear. it was amazing!!!
Yeeeaahhhh I just wrote a dirty, angry....scene for Kaci's AWGfic....it's um....interesting, to say the least. I keep getting scenes for that damn story stuck in my head haha. The way you work, you'll have this done in like 2 weeks haha
I will. But not without help. Mandi gets way more credit than she knows haha. If it wasn't for her a) the one shot would have never happened and b) it would have stayed a one shot.
No I definitely got it. They are very real to me. The kind of characters that you root for and you want wonderful things to happen to them. It's easy to grow attached to them.
Haha ATL fans definitely do suck. But then again, so did most of the FOB and Cobra fans at my show. I HATE 12-14 year old girls that feel the need to wear neon and screams. Metro Station just plain suck so I wasn't surprised that their fans sucked too. I'm only 20, and I felt old at my BND date. Most of the 20+ crowd stayed in the back and went into the mezzanine section.