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Wait --- Why did you poof? You have to tell me more!

Ha, ha. Those are the best claps I've seen.

I think Anicol could be a very dark person to know in the future, and Donnie and Allison need to watch themselves. I've been having a field day editing my own work the past two-three days, so editing is a major love of mine, but no worries I'm not a harsh editor... I hope?

I will definitely come back for another update of Violet, provided you keep writing.

hey hey, sorry i haven't replied to my comments in foreves, i've just been so freakin' busy. it's like i wanna have time to stop a smell the flowers every once in a while. lol. so whats up?

Hmm... Oh right, I'm so sorry. I actually had to try and remember everything about 'Alternativity' when I was commenting and I was so sure Donnie was the villian, please forgive me? It was also hard because they both started with the letter 'D'; I know not much of an excuse, but I'll promise from now on to never make another mistake.

Oh, I thought that was your intention. It seemed to fit well though, all the same though. I see, it makes perfect sense now; I think you should have added just a few more words to that sentence.

It's no problem, I mean, it floated but it floated a little too well, but with the added dialogue and everything - it just needed to be broken up, is all.

I will keep reading, and I will look forward to more plots. And the comments I assure you, will be just as long.

Oh wow. You can be assured I took your advice. I'm just...a bit rusty, to be honest. I used to write like all of the time and then I just stopped. And I only resumed it during the summer, in July, when I joined.

But I'm really glad you're so excited about it. I know I am. I'm going to read some more of your story now. :D

Once again, thanks for the awesome advice. It really helped. And I'm sorry about the part about Lisette confusing you. He was actually supposed to be male; I don't know what I was thinking while writing...must have been distracted, haha. But I fixed it.

And Eleanor runs the manor; more about her will be revealed in the next chapter. I just didn't want the chapter to have a crap load of information when I knew the next one would as well.

Ahaha. Sounds like a good plan. :)

You're extremely welcome. I'm pretty excited about it myself. Haha, I always like to leave long comments, because I know it makes the writer feel like I've actually read it and not just skimmed it. I also know it annoys writers (including me) when someone says "good job," and then they don't even say why they like it or anything. You're definitely doing a really good job of making it creepy, haha. I was really like freaking out.

Thank you so much for the story comment. You're definitely a writer's fantasy commenter as well. You made me see things that I didn't see before. The advice really does help. That's what I like about people who comment like that. Haha. They tell me what I messed up on instead of not telling me at all or saying "you made an error."

But I am really glad you're excited about it as I am. And feel free to leave long comments. I always do. :)

It's not a problem - on both accounts. I hope it goes well, the new chapter that is.

It's quite all right. I let my weirdness show every now and then, I'm not much for one to take comments so lightly either. It's like my heart pounds a mile an hour, my face is read too.

I think an 89 score is equivalant to an A, close to an A+, if that. But I'm really glad you enjoyed writing it because it was so enthralling to read, I was just in awe at everything you had written. Especially David. And his brothers. I'm sure Steven King will be waiting for your challenge!

OH.

I almost forgot. Thanks for the comment on my story! I'm hoping it will be out soon. I'm just trying to get the first chapter right. :)

You're welcome! :)

Well, you should have gotten an A. I bet the teacher was jealous of your mad writing skills. :D

I bet it will be. I'm going to check it out. And Astronaut looks really good too. I'm definitely going to have to check that out too. And don't worry, I can take gruesome stuff. I love scary stories and movies like that. Haha. :)

from the end of march to beginning of june

hey sweetie whats up?

Heya,
I'd just like to let you know that 'Astronaut,' is absolutley amazing. 'Thinking of you,' by Katy Perry definatley reminds me of this song for some strange reason... well apart from the guy going to war and all that crap.. know what? I'll shush and let you watch it. Please do not abandon your story like what many authors tend to do =)...anyways bye x.

Hi yeah I know I need to keep up with Astronaut, it will most likely happen when finals are all over and school ends for the year. :)

Haha thank you for the monster comment :) I promise I'll comment on Astronaut either tonight or tomorrow, but today I need to study my ass off because my chem final is from 4 - 7 today. Boo.

Yes, I did! Thanks for putting it first! I love Astronaut.!

I just read the five parts of Picture Girl and fell in love with it.
Is it done with? :/

Cool, i live in Tx. Where in Texas will u be? Btw: really like ur story Astronaut.