marialice / Comments

yeah go ahead and let me know when you post it. and i'll try my best to help you on the editing part. (=

you're welcome and no problem. (:

your story is really good so far. [:
i would suggest seperating the story into pargraphs, it would be easier to read and look more proffesional. also, since the first chapter is really long, it would probably help to divide it into a few chapters so it's not so long. grammar wise everything looked fine. but there were a few punctuation marks missing here and there, but i'm guessing they were just typos. not trying to be mean, these are just my opinions. (=

no problem. [:

Yup.
He said he'd post it on the network.
Idk, I might do it, I might not. Haha.

our class average was a 60 something(:
but I gotta 70
haha!
oh

I got an 83 (((:
Our class average was a 63, though. "/

Ohh I see. Haha.

will do!
I'm just about to read it...
we're here in chem lab. and we're waiting for our thingy to go up the paper.

haha yeah thanks!
ahh dude thanks :)
yeah I'm gunna update tomorrow

woooh!
heyyyy!
what's up?
I'm good and you?
love your profile.
and... welcome to mibba [:

Haha whoohoo, I got a part in your 'About' section! Lol. Welcome to the site. ((: I can't believe you mentioned Avocado though. Haha.

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hi, welcome to mibba! =D

hey! welcome to Mibba!
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welcome to mibba! i'm natalie. hope you like it here.
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