A.M. Ellerington / Comments

Yo. Hi.
I did finish that picture of Aimery... a while ago, actually. I just haven't had the chance to scan it and get it to you. But I will.
And I really do love how you changed PoD up a little... I'll keep critiquing, as long as I have time.

Sorry I haven't gotten around to critiquing PoD for you... I was out of the country for Holiday so... yeah. No internet. Anyway, I will get to it, just after all of this homework...

Haha... Well thanks!! I should clarify: when I just start rattling off questions its not so much that I'm looking for answers, but they might be questions you need to answer in the text. Of course, some of the stuff that is answered later on don't spoil, but consider thatthe readers will be wondering. But thanks for the explanation. Itreally cleared some things up... Now just make it so all of your readers don't have to ask all of those questions!

And I'll be looking forward to the revised version!!

Uhm... what color are Aimery's scales?

Oh, and I know this sounds creeperish, but I was bored in class today so I drew a picture of Aimery. I'm going to color it, but after that I'll be sure to send you a copy! Just can't get the fella out of my head...

Okay. Yeah... I don't mean to offend anyone, I just don't want to read that sort of stuff... Thanks a ton for understanding! And I've been reading ahead without commenting, so I understand the whole twin thing. They definitely seem like an interesting pair...

If you let me know what to critique for, I can focus on that with the chapters I still have left. I mean, I'll be happy to point out all the moments I feel like emotion and/or description could be added. I want to keep it your story, of course, but I'm happy to help in any way I can.

Don't worry, my first actually good project had a male narrator, and I had a very hard time letting him go when I moved onto my current project... it's weird. Maybe because I'm really not a typical girl, but I always connected with him more than with my female narrators. Maybe it's because they're more raw emotion. I don't know.

Now the asterisks make sense. Got it. Instead of asterisks you might want to just leave a few blank lines... but that's just formatting.

Hmmm. I have an odd question. Is Prince of Drakaedia going to contain yaoi-like content? Because, I love it your story so far, I just really don't appreciate that style... I don't mean to offend you, please understand.

Thank you for the comment on my article and I'm very sad to hear that.
I'm rooting for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OHMIGOSH!
Another Anime/Books/VideoGame/Yaoi Lover!
:)
I'll get right on to reading your stories after i comment about how great you layout is! :)

Only your sneezing!

But. I like sneezing. D:

Kat! :D

You're welcome. :)

okay, I thought so. But I wasn't sure. *Thinks about all the manga she's read* No, I don't think I have read Yaoi, now that I know what it is. And not Yuuri, either. I'll look into it, maybe.

oh, I thought so. Okay, I read your about and I have a question that will make me look stupid. Ready? What is Yaoi Manga. I know what Manga is, but what is yaoi? This is a stupid question and will make me look dumb, I'm sure, but I've heard the term before.... And I even read manga. I bet I've read yaoi before. I just didn't know what it was.

Matt and Mello!!!!
=D

Awh thats kawaii =)
Everyone tries to ignore my yaoi obsession..
Lolz they find it weirdddd

YAY! Yaoi forever <333
Tee hee =)
So whuts up?

hi! =3
I luv ur profile its aweshomeness

*totally random commenter* HI!!!!