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Last chapter's up. The End.

Glad you enjoyed it ^-^ was there enough description this time? Cos I did work on that after you told me to. Thanks for the comment!

Hey, sorry its been so bloody long, feel free to slap me. I've updated though, its a long one so maybe a slap won't be necesarry?...maybe? A small part of why it took so long was that I tried to make it more descriptive, like you suggested. Unfortunately, the next chapter takes part in a dark cell so...heh...not too much to describe there.

Hey, thanks very much for the comment and an even bigger thankyou for the constructive criticism. I'm known to go a bit far with description, so far it gets boring, so I tried to lay off a bit, but thankyou for telling me I'm laying off too much. I'll be sure to take that into account while I'm writing future chapters.
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