October 8th, 2008 at 07:24pm
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Glad you enjoyed it ^-^ was there enough description this time? Cos I did work on that after you told me to. Thanks for the comment!October 4th, 2008 at 01:05pm
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Hey, sorry its been so bloody long, feel free to slap me. I've updated though, its a long one so maybe a slap won't be necesarry?...maybe? A small part of why it took so long was that I tried to make it more descriptive, like you suggested. Unfortunately, the next chapter takes part in a dark cell so...heh...not too much to describe there.September 30th, 2008 at 07:09pm
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Hey, thanks very much for the comment and an even bigger thankyou for the constructive criticism. I'm known to go a bit far with description, so far it gets boring, so I tried to lay off a bit, but thankyou for telling me I'm laying off too much. I'll be sure to take that into account while I'm writing future chapters.
<333 AidynSeptember 10th, 2008 at 03:24pm -
Hello, I'm Mitch.
Welcome to Mibba!September 9th, 2008 at 01:09am -
Hi :)
I'm Nikki, but everyone here calls me Oli, so please do so :)
Welcome to Mibba, I hope you have a tonnnn of fun here, and if you have any questions EVERYONE here is more than likely glad to help.September 9th, 2008 at 12:30am -
Hey,I'm Emily.
Welcome to Mibba. (:September 8th, 2008 at 11:54pm -
Welcome To Mibba =]September 8th, 2008 at 09:28pm
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Hey, welcome to Mibba!
I'm Allison.
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I'm Nick. Hi. Oh yeah, best part of all.... WELCOME TO MIBBA! So what's up?September 8th, 2008 at 09:13pm
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Hey there, welcome to mibba!
Im suziee.
Nice to meet you.
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Welcome to Mibba! ^___^
I'm Chriis. :) What's up?September 8th, 2008 at 08:55pm -
hey (:
welcome to mibba
I'm sure a lot of people have already said that to you
but I thought I'd say it anyways lol
so what's up?September 8th, 2008 at 08:49pm -
Hey!
Welcoming You To Mibba-With A Smile :]
Oh My God I Sound Like A Really Cheesey American!!!September 8th, 2008 at 08:49pm -
Hi!
Welcome to Mibba... the heaven, the hell, the place where all the fiction begins! *tries to make a catchy opening*
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Welcome to mibba : ]
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heyy welcome to mibba
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hey! welcome to Mibba!
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heya welcome to mibba!!
i'm loulou btw, how r u??September 8th, 2008 at 04:42pm
Last chapter's up. The End.