lol okayy
i think ur story-line is way amazing so far
but i think u need to put a BIT more excitement.... just a little bit
of course.. this is onli my personal opinion
otherwise it's good
haha
sry i couldnt come up with more comments haha
im a bit tight on time right now
Heyy, It's OLovelessO
I think your story is pretty good!
I'm not sure how much feedback/criticism/compliment you want... so i'll just leave it at that
i hav more coments if u want.. but be warned... im a very big criticizer .. lol hahah ^^
hey how r u? i would love to be friends im still learning how to work this site lol sorry i didnt reply soon....i forgot how to spell the addresss lol....
Lol...I haven't woke up outside yet, I've actually never woken up, but mom reckons there's been countless times I've slept walked and done the stupidest most random stuff. Apparently I've tried to get out of the house to go for a drive while I was asleep lol, and my little sister once peed in a bucket while sleep walking...I actually think I'm more worried about staying at a friends place and that happening then my mother...And I'm hoping I've still got time to grow outta it too lol...and yea, I think it is really funny that you never get hurt while doing it, no matter what you do...(and thanks for replying to my comment lol)
Hahaha, totally. I usually sleep-talk, but my sis is worse. If I'm in her room and she's asleep, she actually sits up and starts talking to me as if we're in the middle of a conversation. It's damn freaky. O.o
Have you ever sleep-walked? It's even freakier, hahaha. XD