sound the alarm. / Comments

Yes i love them :]
Thats good, Im good thanks, Yeah half term Wooo
xD

Hi
Just a randomer xD
Im guessing you like Mcfly, btw Translyvania is such a good song.
How are you?

New poem. Check it out if you want. Doesn't matter to me if you don't.

hello there sexy ;)
im bored and its like 3:55 AM
and I can't sleep...
something is going through my head...
speek to you soon
i love you
xxxxxxx

hehe thx [x
but i didn' make it. =P

New poem if you care to read it.

New poem to you and all your friends. Also, old poems given a preface to the context of them in my life.

hi!

Thank you for reading the poem. You flatter me... but, after reading it again, I noticed that I did use "icy" a lot. Thank you for the criticsm. It's greatly appreciated.

>=[

imma eatchu.

you're SEXY.

Words are words and they mean nothing,
surely 'I love you' counts for something.
So let's be hasty,
let's be reckless,
just being with you leaves me breathless.
'Cause it's so good to know ya,
that I just can't think how to show ya...
I LOOOOVE YOU,
YOU KNOW THAT,
DON'T YOU?
I LOOOOOOOOOVE YOOOOOU.
I LOOOOOVE YOU,
YOU KNOW THAT,
DON'T YOU?
I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU.


Love that song.

New Poem if anyone cares... it's called "Incinerated from Existence".

Thanks for the criticizm. I really appreciate it.

You said that "Even in Death" was cliché in some parts. Could you point out where? I'd like to know.
Thank you

Well thank you for the compliment on my poetry. I appreciate it. Though I do get enough criticizm from my band about them... whatever though. Thanks for reading them.

Yeah? Thanks, I appreciate it.

Hey. You were honest with Nina's poems (ILoveGirAndMCRDuh). So, can you read mine and then criticize them where needed? I need somewhere to improve but I can't find out where.
Thank you.

Thanks for being honest, but it's probably boring for the fact that it is true. Minus the paste thing. XD