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  • pie_steala

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    Oh i know the feeling! i just have to say i'm doing an extension english peice and it's steeped in fairytales so your story's kinda perfect :) anyway it lead to me reading the entire brother's grimm collection and even though it's probably sacriliege or something i kept comparing their stories to yours :D
    December 6th, 2011 at 10:41am
  • pie_steala

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    So um... Faerie Tale happening anytime soon?? I miss it D:
    October 19th, 2011 at 10:21am
  • Ponyess

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    thanks for reading the story "Not Quite".
    hope you'll enjoy it to the end.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:20pm
  • LikePleatedPants

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    Wow . . . that is just plain sad. Did you confront her about it?
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • LikePleatedPants

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    I hate that people do that! That's been the one thing that's kept me from posting online, even though as you said it is easier to edit. Honestly, if people can't think up their own story, it's time to look for a new hobby, don't just steal from someone else. Changing names and a few worde here and there, doesn't make it yours! People are just so . . . ugh
    June 10th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • LikePleatedPants

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    Thank you! I actually want to be a writer. But all of my non fan-fiction work is strictly in notebooks and on flashdrives. Since that is the work that is most important to me, I try to keep it to myself until it is completely finished.
    June 9th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • LikePleatedPants

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    Thanks for the comment. I'm sorry that you don't like the story, but I appreciate the fact that you were honest with me (: Most people either don't comment period or they exaggerate and sugar coat everything.
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • Perfectly.Beautiful

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    Ok, thanks for your advice/comment. (:
    June 7th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • WantedDistraction

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    Thanks for the constructive critisism, i'll fix the 'I' problem when I have time but as for the 'shyt' part, well as lame as it may be i feel weird typing badwords so thats my attempt at censoring. :)
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • blivy8

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    Thanks so much for commenting on my story.
    Your constructive criticism was very much appreciated.
    Thank you! (=
    June 6th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • Vampire's_Addiction

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    Hi, thanks for commenting on my story. Totally didn't see the whole 'viscous' mistake, so thanks for pointing that out! - But as for the capitalising of sentences? I just went through it and I didn't see any that weren't properly done. I was wondering if maybe you were referring to the sentences that used semi-colons? As words don't need to be capitalised after a semi-colon. Or if I'm just an idiot and missed all the mistakes...ha! (It's likely) :D
    June 5th, 2011 at 10:05pm
  • Sing Song Sung

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    Thanks for the comment! I'm just trying to get all of the backround stuff out of the way, and I just now noticed the title!!XD wow, again THANKS!
    June 5th, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • chlorination.

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    thank you very much for the story comment:-)
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • deleting

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    :) Haha, it's supposed to be.
    June 5th, 2011 at 05:45pm
  • MindGames

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    Thanks for commenting on my story. I totally agree with what you have to say, I hope that as I grow as a writer I can improve. :)
    June 5th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • SweetHoney

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    I luv your faerie tale story!
    April 18th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • Eideeena

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    Thank you ^^
    March 21st, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • RachaelRose16

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    Thank you for the comment :)
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • roar;

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    thanks for the story comment. And i know some of my paragraphs run long but that's only in that one my other story doesn't lol thanks tho :]
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • nashville owen

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    Thanks for the story comment :)
    It's actually just a one shot, but it might have potential for more in the future.
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:50am