Actually, the beginning is when Eli and Z are three, The mother has flashbacks that tell the story as they are at Jimmy's because having her kids gone, she has more free time to let her mind wander :p
im glad you like it! and about Erik Roner... i have no clue why i didnt include him lol. i completely forgot. ill be sure to write him in soon because i do like him lol :]
thanks for reminding me!
It was for my story Complicated Marriage. The chap would make more sense if you had read the first few chapters first, and you already got-what I guess would be-a sneak peek at what's coming up in the next chapter.
actually, funny story. I was writing a chapter for a different story on a computer at school, and since I couldn't save it to the actual computer, I had to post it here. Since Hell Fire is a one shot, I didn't think anyone would bother reading it. but now I see ppl have read it before it was actually completed, so now I'm gonna remove it and save it to my computer.
thanks ^_^ i really do appreciate comments about my stories =D chapter 41 of opposite attraction will be out tomorrow as well as chapter 3 of Decisions
Thankings you! It's lovely to still get feedback!!
The pictures are in the character profiles - you can find them in the same top bar as how you get to subscribing and commenting etc. They're not quite how I imagine people, but they're pretty much the same. ^_^