thanks so much for the comment. and don't worry about not writing long comments, every single comment means so much to me. i'm so glad you enjoyed it. thanks.
Thanx for reading and I posted because I knew I had alot of work to do on it and I needed to know what to do on it. The people who are close to me that can read it and fix it are too busy, besides I have pleantly of proof to back up my that this is my work. Yes the chacters' names are made up. I didn't want them to have names everyone else had.
watching my team get crushed 20-1 sadly enough. really slaughter house. i have mixed feelings because my favorite player was signed to the division rivals who are killing them right now.
OMFG! Your such a great writer!!! You should continue to secret keeper one. I'm not going to read eclipse just in case you don't finsh it because I'll be heartbroken. But yeah I cried when I was reading the secret one.