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yeh sorry for laffin at the crazy gee thing

yes you are ~:)
I love that smiley :)
xxx

Ok also I was not 55 kg at the age of 5!! I'm not even 55kg now asshead

I know how it feels though cuz if I remeber correctly u did jump on my head a couple times too.

I c ur 2 sad 2, like I suggested: GET FUCKING OVER IT!!!

U obviously r so thick u don't know the difference btween showing nd telling aren't u?

show- The man was slumped in his chair, his eyes closed. He twitched once and a while but except for that he was completely still.

tell- the man was sleeping.

Now which one sounds the most like it was written by a 5 yr old?

and yes, you do write like that.

Well I guess we can both say you do not have a future in writing

also don't say "but if I show then I'll b writing a paragraph for something that only needs a sentence" Well then I hope you enjoy ur life in the wonderful world of "What is this crap?"

g'day

Now be on your way?
Yes, and did you misplace your handkerchief? Or maybe you would like a scone with your tea?

Oh and BTW I will say what I have to say about your hair but... maybe later... Oh what the hell! I'll say it now!

Your hair does not match your fat cheeks.

THANK YOU!! I've finally gotten that off my chest. I've bee thinking it every time you smile and now I finally have a reason!!!

Oh and BTW the shitty-ness of your xmas presents finally kicked in and I am paying you back for how pissed I should have been at you on boxing day

Also there are these wierd tiny lil dents you have all over ur face. R they chicken pox scars or they just part of ur natural... "beauty"?

I wasn't calling your stories shit. Here is what I was saying:

1) 'I am So Dirty' Did you not think b4 namin?
2) Gerard kills ppl 4 fun! I have a right to think thats wierd

Here's just some extra stuff.

3) Stories aren't just about the story line. You have to put the details in. Explain it. You don't ever do that. With you it's just action action action.
4) You always tell instead of show. Biggest writer mistake
5) Ppl you know have the same laugh as me. It's called genes and mine have to come from somewhere
6) I once again suggest the anger management lessons
7) There are 2 types of hurt: the hurt on the outside and the hurt on the inside. In most situations the inside hurt is worse.
When I was 5 I jumped on your head. Get fucking over it!
But I came to you with my trust. Do you know how betrayl feels?

Here's some stuff a little more off the subject:

8) You have to stop trying to make me think that I don't have any real friends cuz mine are as real as yours
9) Stop pretending you don't care about anything.
10) I like eating your cereal and if I'm hungry I'll eat it period.
11) You always say you're so independant and never follow the crowd. Then stop copying your friends!
12) Poking you is alot more satisfying than hugging you
13) You so fake your fear of kitchen knives
14) I like Death Note. You did not get me into Death Note. I am not copying you by liking Death Note. I don't need your opinion on the reason I am reading it
15)
In conclusion I must say
"Get a life Bitch!"
And have a nice day

something really... corny... Gee-ology. Yeah, lol.
jeez, i feel stupid. XD

I dont get what you just said, but ... YEAH! SURE! Lol
No, but, like, I live in new york -the state- but not in the nyc area. yeah... does that make sense?

im actually pretty good at geology...

the only thing about saying new york, is that many people think that its nyc that im talkeing about... which its not. lol

yeah. its pretty cold here too. i live in new york

lol, its ok. where do you live?

in your story u said u werent sure if nj had cold weather.. it does, trust me.

thanks for the story comment!!

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haha thanks

hahah thanks
yes i'll try 8)

Thanks for the comment. Hopefully I'll actually update it more than once an eon soon. x.x

The Commenting thingy was acting stupid!
Sooooooooooooooooo. I wuv the chapter!
Also, thanks for mentioning me. :]

Gabbie

thanks for the comment (:

ELLO sorry i saw your story and i love it lol