OMG thanx!!! So it's alright?? i dont wanna get gangbashed by Potter-lovers, but tbh he's annoying, and all the good characters (other than Fred and George) are baddies :P
Hey me again! Yeah i accidently forgot to put that chapter in sorry!!! But its there now and i've also made a change to chapter 17 (Elvin Blood) coz i messed up her age there :S
Its so great to see people actually enjoy my story!! It's not as good as I'd like, but I might be starting another one soon - more Harry Potter ideas!!!
Hey thanx so much for the comment - read chapter 21 again coz i missed a huge bit out sorry!!!
And is there anything you think i should improve on at all?