haha. Im not sure about the narrative thing, is it non fiction.and oh that sucks! But I'm glad you are reading Night Crawler!!XD please comment, but only if you luvvvv me! :P kidding XD you don't have to comment if you don't want to!
haha. well I didn't understand ALL of it but its mainly because you told me alot about the books and characters before I read it, so it probably wasn't off at all, like who is Jeb, Gasman and Angel? I dunno but the others you explained to me and I'm quick at catching onto things.
Okay, I just read your About Me... The two quotes from Artemis Fowl and Hitchhikers guide, are the only phrases I only ever care about anymore... XD
Lol, I kill for books. Have you read The Lioness Rampant Series byTamora Pierce? Omg... You would love them. And The Matrix Trilogy kills things with a wink... *faints from love* That darned agent Smith... Though I think underneath all the evil, anger, scariness, and power, he's close to an almost good heart. :) Probably because he played V in V for Vendetta. My favortie move apart from the Dark Knight and the Breakfast Club. Okay, rambling now, but I'm a nerd, so I ramble about good movies, books, and poems and whatnot. :)
I think your story is really good because it really paints a detailed picture. Like Nick seems so adorable and I don't really know him. I try to aim for that but it's easier said than done!
Jasper = *SQUEALS* I love him and Jacob! I hate how everyones all jumped up over Edward. He's just horrible. I hate him... Maybe not hate, but dislike greatly. :)
Anyways, how you liking Mibba so far? (It's how I found your story; in the new stories section! :D)
Hahaa, I have to check out Letting Go now:P Unless thats the fan fic then i won't know a blasted thing! I really need to get into Max Ride dont I? Anyways, thank you sooooo much for the comments Manda XD I hope you really did enjoy "Mr.Wonderful" hehe XD and yes if you were my publisher I would give you the darn book for free :P Call me up if it ever gets good enough to get published and I'll give you it have price :P Hahaha, luvs.
~Michelle
Hey, welcome to Mibba!!
Im Shani.
I love Twilight, alot of people on here do.
But I love Max Ride, I havent read the third though.
You seem pretty cool and out there.