That was your first story?
Wow, it was really goo for a first story.
Mine was compleatly awful!
I don't even want to think about it!
-shudders-
I really want to see where you go with it!
It has a bunch of potental :D
There is some spelling errors that you might want to fix though. ^-^
Hope I helped :D
I'm not American.. Canadian I is.
And, we only got to do it once, when the teacher just didn't care what we did because she was pissed off beyond belief.
My dad is teaching me the guitar so he teaches me all old songs but they are kind of cool>> like Smoke on the Water. I have a hard time with the fingering though. I think I need longer fingers or a smaller guitar!