Of course your writing is good!!! You just have to be very careful with the story "description" and "tags" if you want a lot of readers. Since you've got a Shia story going on you have to make sure his name is in it all. Also, the more recent your update is, the higher on the list your story becomes. If someone types into 'search' "Shia Labeouf" the first stories to pop up are the newest and the ones with the most recent added chapter. You also have to keep in mind that there might not be such a huge fan base for Shia! For instance, I LOVE Sam Worthington but not too many people on Mibba do... lol so there are only like 3 stories with his name on it and you know what? They are all either one shots or completed with only like 8 chapters... Plus, you aren't only writing for fans, you are writing for yourself! I know that if I go too long without updating my Damon Salvatore story that I actually begin to feel like I miss Damon.... I know.. sounds crazy... but writing can really bring you to another world. Don't give up lady, Shia needs you to go on with the story!
Haha, thanks. I thought that taylor Lautner should know that even though I find him unbelievably handsome, he'll never be number one in my life and will only be the man that I'll settle for. ;D