Thank you so much for commenting, it really means a lot. (: The whole diary concept annoyed me so much to write. I kept wanting to stop it and go back to the 'normal' story-telling way.
Thank you soo much for your comment, I am glad you enjoyed my story so far.
I really try to convey everyone's thoughts, cause I hate when you just have one person's thoughts, then you are left to assume EVERYTHING. Some assuming is okey.
Anyways, thank you! Your comment meant a lot to me. I hope you continue reading Hush, Yael.
Thanks for the comment! Ooh yeah that makes sense! I wrote it in a rush for NaNoWriMo last summer so I'll keep that in mind! Maybe if I'm not lazy I'll try and fix it :p oh good hah I went to read it again before I posted it and I'm like no I can't do it! Thanks do much, I appreciate the feedback :)
no problem! i'm just glad you understood my ramblings c: i think character based stories, i like getting to know them. and your story had the added bonus of the apocalypse plot. i'm excited for the next chapter!