Cosmic_Fae / Comments

will you please read my story? It would mean a lot to me. thank you(:

alright,

^_^
Yeah, it is really crazy , isn't it ? And i have the grammar of a 5 year old . Some mistakes weren't intended though , cause my keyboard is really jank and the letter don't transmit very well .

tired, i got up way too early for my own good

OH. makes sense... in evil ways.
Guessing leaves me with a messed up brain, so [b]thanks[/b] for that.
[notice the sarcasm]
haa, just messin' with ya... not about the brain part though.
ahh i sounded bitchy.
sowwy.

hahaha... i'm so tired. got a headache from all the rain. ouchy. :(

Ermm... nothing drastic... but when you change perspectives you might want to lable who's perspective it is... and maybe on the part where Dave kills the evil Death God's, describe some ninja action and what not!!! :)
but, other than that I think everything's good... i dont remember anything else.
:]]]
so how are you lately???

Oh yeah, I know, it's not the most original story out there, but the way you write it isn't like today's stuff, does that make sense???
I mean, not that I don't enjoy those books (for example the Twilight series), you know, it just gets boring.
So this is something a bit more refreshing.
And I hope I do continue to enjoy this story. :)
Hope my compliments don't intimidate you into trying to hard!!
ha.
--emily

hey your welcome. !
the story is very original, which is hard to find on this site. :)
i'll deff read it, okay???

Heya! thankyou for the comments! its a real confidence booster! i'll write another chapter right now!!!! ^-^

No Problem!!!

have a fever? that sucks, and it's summer vacation, too... i like getting sick during the school year so i can skip.. x] get well soon!

haha i know what you mean. I wrote out the whole summary to my vamp story already, I'm just procrastinating on writing the actual story out now...

Oh alright. I don't mind waiting too much... As long as you don't forget about the story. =]

figures, i dont re read what i write right after i write it, i have to wait a while before i can or else i miss every little mistake b/c i knew what i was thinking at that moment instead of reading like a reader would

i'm getting ready to go into german II when school starts back up. idk if i used some of it right but i like adding that kind of flare into my stories. i'm glad you read it. what did you thing?

me too!
so, how is you're day going?

i am very happy! i got to spend the day swimming and sun bathing then go see star trek. it was very nice and i had fun!

i'm glad you like it ^.^
actually, the story kind of went a different direction then what i wanted it but i still love it! i just need to work on it more

haha, summer school doesn't start yet for me!!!!

Don't worry about the writers block, I'm going through the same. Well, more of writers laziness, but still. Haha. Can't wait for upates!