Your welcome and thank you for your comment.
I know they were short and hope to make them longer. My chapters, (in other stories and before I re-did this one), used to be longer. I don't know what happened. They also used to be more desriptive.
I'm thinking of taking this story down completely to work on it.
Thanks again.
The winners for the "Who's Job is it Anyway?" contest are finally announced.
Both Aly and I are terribly sorry for the delay.
Thanks for entering!
-Cari
17. Hahah. It was my birthday a couple of days ago. Well, like two weeks really. Being seventeen is such a drag. Being this age sucks. I've always wanted to go to Canada! Like, actually, I'm not just saying that.
New Zealand, mate! Haha. I'd go to the end of the world for you. 'Cause you're my friend! At the moment I'm in New York. Where abouts are you? And how old are you?
TA HAHH! i just think that you should hae described a little bit more Hayley's emotions and you should have written brian's words in a more.... intense way yeah! intense! that was the prob. the lack of intnsity in a moment that actually needed it so fucking baaaad. But I actually think that this is still exccelent and i am dying cause i cnt wait for the next chapttttt
xoxoxoox
Hahah, yeah, well, I adore you too.
SHUT UP! Everyone loves the story. And plus, anyone who says they hate the story are obviously mentally retarded in some way or another. And, it they voice their opinions, don't you worry baby, I'll be going Sophia on their asses. In fact, if anyone says anything to you, story related or not, you let me know, kay? Yeah, dayum! Straight up. S-to-the-H-to-the-I-to-the-T beyotchs.
Yeah, it is pretty weird. But it's not short for anything. I changed my name and just moved to a different country. Yeah. You know how it is. Haha