I am really bad / Comments

youch that sucks.
actually i like told off my teacher the other day so that was kool. (but i do that all the time so it wasn't a major thing)
and some problems but no worries. :)

haha. so anything new?

ooohh... nice. :)
i like rock.
well i'm glad you're glad. :D

mmkay! =D
YAY...hehe
...my dog is barking >.<

like a band at school or like a rock band?
well i'm glad you're glad! haha.
so what happened that made you glad?

really?? what's it about??

not much. thanksgiving break!!!!!!!
no school tomorrow through sunday!! 5 whole days of no school!! *jumps around in excitement*
=D

your welcome.
an i'm listening to music.
to be more specific, welcome to the black parade by mcr.
what about you?

mmkay =)

I know how to italisize in journals, poems, stories and in the about me, but i dont know how to do it in comments =/

sorry i haven't been on so much =/
what's new??

oh. well i'm sorry about the worse but i'm glad it's better. :)

eh i'm ok i guess. but moreso bad. :/
what do you mean you can't say anyting else?
so how's your life?

no problem! I actually wouldn't call it a gramatical error, it was just a formatting thing, I guess.

I copied part of the paragraph where it occurs:
Smiling, Dew walked the busy streets of San Francisco downtown. All I need is a very sweet, clean plan to be carried out by best friend. He continued to dodge the crowd he met. I need hmmmmm, a gun and a nice finger cutter. He lifted his left hand as he makes his way through the mob...

and it goes on from there. I guess it's just the part of Dew's thoughts. At first I couldn't tell they were thoughts, and I thought it was a point of view change/error/thing. So you could put them in quotes, italics, or indicate in some way that they're his thoughts.

That's really all that I found though. I like it a lot, and I cant wait to see what happens next ^_^

aaaahhhhh san fransisco!!! I really want to visit there. my parents used to live there and they loved it ^_^

mmkay, I can go read it =)

hmmmm...idk. my mom is pretty bad. u?

oh right thats no good :(

ha life is shit all together

really cool i love photography as well although i have a really crap teacher for it this year :(
do u like skatboarding as well?

sorry this took so long...blah, school >.<
I live in iowa.. but it's not as boring as everyone thinks...i live in a college town, it's nice ^_^
moderate climate...hmmm, in the US? anywhere in the midwest would do for moderate climate, like illinois (Chicago) or missouri (St. Louis). Those are both kinda big cities, but I think they'd be a cool place to set a story =)

oh god..me too! wanna ask eachother random questions?
if so uyou can ask me first! :)

cool! so, what is up?

cara

oh right try not to think about them. . lol

ok umm. .
i will most likely leaving home soon if my mum has one more shot at me. .
i live in australia victoria. .
love my photogrphy music n art. .
umm
oh i got woken up at 6:30 by a door bell under my bed yes a door bell under my bed. . lol n no i didn't out it under there. .

sorry if i offended you, u dont have to talk about it.
Kings of leon? only the best band in the ENTIRE world, ily them. i get to see them next year, sooooooooooooooooooooooo excited!! you might know their song sex on fire?