Damsel of Darkness / Comments

HAHAHAHA... Jackass had become such an huge part of my life and all my freinds were always doing stupid shit like that cuz we watched that show. It was great. I remember we saw the screening of Jackass 2 before it was out in theaters. ahaha. That was awesome. Everyone was so jealous.

Aww, I'm glad that one of my stories inspired yours! That's hecka awesome! =] And man, with a plot like that (and more to occur) I really really wanna read it. Seriously, it's gonna be so awesome.

Ha, the funny thing is that for one of the antagonists in my original story, I need to watch 'A Clockwork Orange' cuz he kinda reminds me of Alex. It'll be interesting when I get to that part. ha. Until then, who knows what's gonna happen but I should be updating it soon enough. =] yee.

Yeah, I'm writing three right now. 'Jigsaw', 'Sufferer/Witness' and 'Sleepwalking' so I understand your struggle. HAHA. Once I started writing 'Jigsaw' with the wrong character names. That was interesting. Ha. But you're seriously insane for taking on so many at once! Jesus! You've been a busy girl! hahah.

i know plus it was just too soon. should come out with another chapter today. :]

thank you for the story comment! who cares if your new, now you can comment all the time haha XD

Thank you for the comment :)

AHAHA. I know I'm insane but the ne sleep thing finally caught up with me and I ended up going to bed super early last night... like 7:30. God I was dead and everyone felt the need to call me cuz Obama smashed McCain in the election and they wanted to celebrate. I slept throught all that madness.

HA. I guess my years of watching Bam and the crew have paid off if I'm making it seem like that's what they would say. There was a time where I would only watch Jackass and Viva La Bam cuz I was obsessed with how hilarious it was. ha.

And yeah, it must be difficult to get Zacky to be a complete asshole but I'm sure if you find that one picture in your head of him being one then you could totally pull it off. I tried writing 'Dublin Waltz' with Zacky being the the insulting one but it didn't work out for me. Besides, I decided I needed to write a Syn Gates story for once. ahah. When you actually work out all the kinks to that story, I would love to read it! =] I wanna see Zacky be an asshole in your eyes. ahaha.

Yeah. I get the whole 'movie playing in the head' thing. That's exactly how it is when i'm writing too. And it comes complete with a soundtrack! =] The only story that I'm having issues with is my original story. It doesn't want to cooperate like the others do. Maybe I'm forcing it too much. I dunno. But I love leaving lengthy comments, obviously. I like to let people know exactly what I'm thinking.

oh yes. well then again leana and gena are pretty damn lucky too. :D

HAHAHA well, when we started this commenting war thing, it was like 3:30 in the morning here in Cali so I've been up for a very, very long time. Pulled an all nighter and didn't even bother to sleep! WOOOO!

AHAHAHAH... I'm glad that you like the jokes in that story... the only problem with that is that it's so freaking hard to come up with random shit they would pull. Usually I have to turn on some CKY videos of Jackass clips to drawn my inspiration. The medieval sword fight I wrote was taken from an idea I got from a Jackass clip. A lot of the stuff that Dico says is actually taken from the clip. ahahaha.

I'm so glad for the drama to come in that story and you already know you'll get a big response from me (like always) cuz I always just feel like I'm there when it all happens. hahaha. I know, it's sad but I feel like I'm sitting right there when they're arguing or having sex.... creepy much... anyway, yeah. ahah. I can't wait!!!!

Ha. I actually found this picture thing that has all their names and character names on google but it's kinda small. =[ And I cannot believe you haven't seen the 'Harry Potter's. Oh my God! That's like... wow. I've never met a person who hasn't at least seen one of them. hahah. Wow... I'm so shocked.

I actually got my voting stuff done and all it took was twenty mintues because there was no one there in the middle of the afternoon. It was freaking great! =] And then I sat on my ass in Spanish, dying of boredom cuz my Profesora won't let me surf the web, even though I'm ahead in this class. Bummer!

Well, you're not the only one filling up a page with long ass ramblings! I'm doing it too but that's just becasue I have a lot to say and neveer know when to shut up. haha.

I updated though.

thanks for the story comment. :D

Yeah... I've been tweaking and adding a lot to all different kinds of stories. It's funny cuz I'm so maticulous(sp? ahha) about what I post and how it's written and blah, blah, blah that I need to sit on a chapter for two or three days after writing it and adding lines here and there to perfect that it's ridiculous. Sadly, the only one I haven't done that for is 'Jigsaw Falling into Place'. I just write and then post right after I finish a section. ahaha.

Man, I can't wait to read A7X multi-chapters! =] That's gonna be so freakin sweeeeeet! And I've realized that 'Opposites Attract' will soon come to an end, and that saddens me cuz I love the drama. haha.

HAHA. Ok, here's what I recommend you do for 'The Sufferer & The Witness'... just find a 'Twilight' movie website and you'll see not only the characters that are in the movie but the actor's names playing that role. If you've ever seen the 4th 'Harry Potter' movie then you definitely already know who Robert Pattinson is... cuz he plays poor Cedric Diggory! =[

But yeah.... see... the fact that I'm sitting here and describing all this stuff to you is super lame... cuz I should be filling out my absentee ballot for the election today but instead, I'm surfing the web.... before spanish class.... lame!

HAHAHA, you're a talented writer. I enjoy reading your fics. I love the way you've bascially nailed a typical asshole boy down perfectly. haha. I'm sure if you gave it a shot, you'd be fine at writing an original story. I was thinking about posting another one that I've got as well but I'm not sure that it's ready to be posted. Maybe that's just my self-consciousness.... hahaha.

I've actually never seen that movie... surprisingly enough. There's a lot of stuff I've never seen because my taste in movies and whatnot is so freaking odd. I think right now, the only thing I'm hip and up to date with is the 'Twilight' phennomenon. ha. I mean, I ever started writing a fan fic about the actor playing Edward.... people really seem to like that one.

I'm afraid I'm just all around lame. =/

There's just something to be said about vampires. They're freaking awesome for some odd reason. That's why i wanted to write one cuz i thought I would try my hand at writing a whole separate world as well as adding some supernatural elements. =] Killing two birds with one stone.

Yeah, the story i read was completely lame..... i hate re-reading all my older stuff. My content was completely juvenile. =/

ha, then she and I have something in common. I love vampires. There's something about their whole demeanor that I can relate to. though I don't think I would dress up as one for Halloween. ha.

Yeah, cringe... I definitely get that. I re-read something from my freshman year and thought, 'holy shit, i really sucked back in the day compared to now.'

Thanks for the story comment I really appreciate it

I couldn't have said it better myself. =]

And those books are definitely worth checking out for some light fun. The characters are pretty interesting and the plot works well but it's a slow build in the first book. My favorite book has to be 'Eclipse' (the third of the series) because I get to find out about Jasper's character (whom I find to be completely fascinating). But I've been re-reading them because the movie's coming out later this month... I know... I sound like a dork.

Ha. Well I'm glad you like the way I've been writing. I've noticed it's changed from some of the stories I've written in the past and it's actually getting better. But of course, I'll still tell myelf that it's not good enough... not perfect. ;]

Ha. That's what my friend dom tells me. She wants me to push this out into a full fledged novel but who knows if I have that kind of strength in me. I barely hav ethe strength to stay focused in this story now and it's just started. I dunno... we'll see how it continues to flow. I'm actually reading the 'Twilight' series over and over and over again for inspiration because I was so angry with that author for writing a good story horribly. The characters were great and the plot was good but the way she wrote it all was so mediocre but I guess that has to do with the aim of the audience. I don't plan to dumb it down for younger teens. hahaa.

But that's so true... everyone is their own worst critic. =] it's just how the world works when you've got some kind of artistic talent. One must achieve perfection.

P.S. - I just updated Sleepwalking Past Hope... just for you. =]

That one is definitely my baby. It's so different from the other original works I've tried to write. I've been working on the fifty pages I have written so far for about six months or so because it takes an entire mindset to focus on. I have trouble getting into this world I've created because I just can't imagine it sometimes.
It's difficult but it's slowly coming along. =]

But I think it's silly writing. Sometimes I think I end up sounding too boring and conventional. I need to come up with better ways of constructing my stories.

haha!
thats ok.
ill forgive you for being boring
i am too
i only do like 2 extra things outside school; guitar and work
im fun... not

AHAHAHAHA. I'm glad that you said finally.
I thought so too when I was writing it. ha.
=]
Thanks for the comment. I always enjoy reading what you have to say to my silly writing.