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  • silvermoonshadow27

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    I am glad that I was able to help motivate you with your writing, I understand how it can be when you get to a tough spot in setting up a story and am happy that I was able to help.

    With the speed of any story, you may lose people if it is not now, now, now, but with true readers who can see the depth behind the story and characters the time makes us come back each and every time for more and then to reread it again and again. It is hard to find this balance on web sites, because we live in a now, now, now world but if you look at the world of books you see this set up time and again, and it keeps working. The way you write reminds me of some one who is setting up a series of books not just a stand alone and this is what true readers are looking for. So never worry about people getting fed up with the slow burn the true readers will always be reading.

    Do not worry about me losing sleep I am a grown woman and I know my limits and when I find a good story I just can not stop reading. :D

    Can not wait for the plot twists to come, I can already see some that may be coming and am hopping for some other ones as well, so we will see what comes and I will read all of them with baited breath.@ clint barton.
    February 25th, 2016 at 04:59am
  • clint barton.

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    Hey, love! I wanted to drop by and say thanks so much for taking the time to comment on Dru! It really meant a lot for me to hear how much you're enjoying the story (and it really motivated me to finish the chapter that had been stumping me for a while).

    I cannot explain to you how relieved I am to hear that you like the pace at which their relationship is going; I keep worrying that people will get fed up with the slow burn and start to lose interest in the story, but obviously I want to be true to the characters. And, as you said, I definitely want to build the trust foundation before trying to to erect the house.

    Sorry to hear you lost sleep reading through the story, but I'm glad you find it suspenseful enough to find it worth that trade-off! (; I'll definitely work on the plot-twists -- thanks for the tip! Please let me know if you ever get the feeling the plot is dragging and needs to be kicked up a bit.

    Again, thank you ever so much for the comment; it really meant the world and I still get a smile stuck on my face every time I re-read your words. Seriously, thank you! (:
    February 22nd, 2016 at 11:10pm
  • Annie Black

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    Hahahahahahahahaha really?
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:08am
  • StandardMisery

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    hey thanks for the story comment (:
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:40pm
  • Miyral

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    Cool. Fits the character pretty well, don't you think? And thank you. It's always fun to find out what different names mean. Least I think it is. =]
    March 7th, 2011 at 09:10pm
  • Miyral

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    I can't seem to find it and now it's going to bug me. Do you know what it means?
    March 7th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • Miyral

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    Is it really? Well I must say, I love your middle name. I'm glad you approve of it's use for my character. I love it when things like that happen. X]
    March 7th, 2011 at 04:18pm
  • Miyral

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    I haven't thought too much about other stories. I've mainly been focused on getting this one finished. I have had a few ideas so there is a possibility but I make no promises. As for the name I used to have a friend by the name of Eveline. It's also a song by Nickle Creek. I haven't looked up the meaning of it, but now you've made me curious. I think I'm going to have to look it up.
    March 7th, 2011 at 03:27pm
  • im fluent in sarcasm

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    thanks for the comment! i'll update as soon as i can...hopefully....maybe... :D
    March 6th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I'm glad you liked it. <333 :)

    There might be a completely new story like it, but that particular one shot will not be continued, aha.<3
    March 3rd, 2011 at 11:21pm
  • Bedlam66

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    Thanks lots for commenting! I'm SOOOO glad you liked it!
    March 2nd, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • Rapture Love

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    :D thanks for your continued support!
    February 20th, 2011 at 10:33am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Thanks for commenting! I'm glad that you like it. :) I'll update as soon as possible.
    February 15th, 2011 at 12:07am
  • HisGardenOfEden

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    Thanks for the comment and taking the time to read it :) I hope you'll like the sequel if you read it.
    February 9th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • Rapture Love

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    Thanks for reading and commenting on my story :) Hope you read more [;
    February 8th, 2011 at 06:00am
  • Annie Black

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    Awesome, thank you. ^^
    February 7th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • FaytheMichelle

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    Thank you and because if she did there wouldn't be a story :] lol
    But yeah, I know what you mean, before I started writing, I always thought the same thing! xD

    - Faythe :]
    January 28th, 2011 at 08:23am
  • WhereItGetsReal

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    thanks for the story comment!
    and yes, actually, you will get to see qhat Troy thinks in the next chapter(:
    January 24th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    You say: I love Justin Bieber. I want to marry him and have his kids.
    I say: What the hell, CRADLE ROBBER. (This has happened to me more times than you want to know about, with woman 21 and older.)
    You say: That movie was the best.
    I say: The Book is way better.
    You say: Disney movies are for babes.
    I say: Guess who is the baby.
    You say: Edward or Jacob.
    I say: Get a life, with a real boy.
    You say: Twilight
    I say: There are better Vampire books out there.
    You say: Barbie
    I say: Barbie Girl by: Aqua
    You say: Vampires or Werewolves.
    I say: Werewolves.
    You say: All blonds are dumb.
    I say: Well so are you.
    You say: You hurt my sister and I will hurt you.
    I say: YOU HURT MY SISTER AND I WILL TAKE YOU OUT!!!
    You say: You're weird.
    I say: I am so going to have fun scaring you.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:26am
  • Miyral

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    I thank thee for the comment! =]
    November 15th, 2010 at 04:14pm