bleedsforyou / Comments

aw, you're not mad! good, i felt like i was sounding like a royal bitch with my comment (that thing was like a mini novel, holy hell), but i'm glad you didn't like block me or something :)

i think you're a fabulous writer- you write in a way that kinda makes the reader feels like it's THEIR point of view, and not just like they're reading the thoughts of the narrator. plus you don't focus on meaningless details (something that i still struggle with, sadly- i feel like the less i give information on, the more my readers will probably be left clueless), and your dialogue sounds natural, like people around the world could be having those same conversations at this very moment.

to be honest, the story turned out just fine. yes- after you mentioned it, i did feel as if Alyssa kinda dropped off the face of the planet, and could've make a reappearance at any time towards the ending. maybe she could've been the one who accompanied Emilia on tour instead of the already reluctant Cass? can you imagine Em telling her what went on between her and Harry, Alyssa (probably after a while) accepts it, and then is able to tell Harry "No hard feelings." to his face? but what's done is done, and i like it the way it is. i don't understand how some people have intricately written outlines anyways- i have major plot points in my mind and just write around them (maybe that's where i go wrong, i don't know). for that being purely from the imagination and no pre-writing, Caught Up In You came out phenomenally. and i'm already subscribed to the next story, can't wait to see what you have cooking :D

As you should be dear, your stories are golden and I'm hooked <3

Thank you! That makes me ridiculously excited!

I'm Sidney :)

YOU HAVE NO COMMENTS?! No, no.. That won't do.

So, hi. I'm Alexis. And I really like your stories.


Wow, I'm awkward..