November 23rd, 2008 at 09:49pm
dearemilyy / Comments
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Totally diggin ur plot twist. Amnesia was something i didn't see coming. Edward leaving almost made want to cry! It's got to be so hard on Amelie. Anywho, finally got those Carlisle POV's out. Let me know how I did, I'm a little nervous about them. Update soon please! I'm dyin to see what happens.November 23rd, 2008 at 07:46pm
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I live in East Yorkshire, in between York and Hull (:
Are you from England?
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I love it its such a good twist, i didnt see it coming.November 22nd, 2008 at 12:06am
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Omg. noooooooooooo. amnesia ? how could you ? i feel so bad for edward. D:November 21st, 2008 at 01:28pm
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Mahaha! Chapter three is out and I think I got that new format down. Let me know? Thankies and much loves.November 19th, 2008 at 08:55pm
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OMG YOU UPDATED ILY :DNovember 18th, 2008 at 03:43am
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i think her attitude changed because Meyer got A little bit more obnoxious with all the fame and stuff.November 17th, 2008 at 06:21am
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Honestly, If i had to chose between the real book and this one, I would totally have chosen this one , it 's so much more realistic, in my opinion, Bella plays it too cool in the Stephenie Meyer version, YOURS SHOULD'VE BEEN PUBLISHED. like seriously i wouldn't have been like " yeah you're a vampire, that's pretty cool , y'know i wanna be one too" It would've been more like
" What're you smoking ? you retard , you're hott and stuff, but i don't wanna hook up with a bipolar freak "November 17th, 2008 at 04:52am -
OHMYGOD! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME ? TORTURE ME BY NOT UPDATING YOUR STORY D': i swear I've never gasped louder in my life as soon as i read the last line, i literally screamed and when i found out there wasn't a 37th chapter, i almost cried, PLEASE UPDATE ?November 17th, 2008 at 04:36am
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Okay, tried a different format with the chapters. Can you tell me if it's easier to follow?
Thanks!November 14th, 2008 at 07:14pm -
I am so reading your story as soon as this weekend is over.
I have a test on fallacies tomorrow, and then this weekend I have a jazz festival to run. Gah! So tiring...November 14th, 2008 at 08:32am -
yes pleaseNovember 14th, 2008 at 07:52am
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Oui.
Don't ask me.
I explain EVERYTHING.November 14th, 2008 at 06:40am -
Awh, amazing.
:D
I love sarcasm..
you know what my favorite book is?
The Center of the World.November 14th, 2008 at 05:31am -
orlly?
STOP IT.
Now I really wanna go now..
even though its almost nine and not open.
and THEN I have to wait till three.
;D
Nice.
So is she one of your favorite authors?November 14th, 2008 at 04:53am -
=p
Is it?
I NEED TO FIND IT, DAMN IT ALL.
I need books to read anyway.
Maybe I'll get my mom to stalk Chapters again
when she goes tomorrow.November 14th, 2008 at 04:49am -
Cool.
=p
Its tres good.
Like yours, I find.November 14th, 2008 at 04:42am -
Spec' since [i]you[/i] wrote it.
*grumblegrumble*
I actually just read a vampire story by one of my friend's, BrightenStar.
You should read it.November 14th, 2008 at 04:36am -
Ouiouihello.
oh wow.
thirty three.
<.>November 14th, 2008 at 04:23am
i don't actually know where Richmond is haha.
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